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u drop first son
pc
shud be a good battle
no crew ovtes only thugs cna vote

as i remember you said i pm you and we both drop... so none of that drop first shit... who the fuck you calling son?? :?

AITE CHEKC IN WE BOTH GOT 35 MINTUES AFTER 45 MINUTES ITS A NO SHOW AN UGE VOTES I GUES.S. UDOWN
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DONE U GUNNA DROP
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You're a bore and dumb.. Talk a lot and flop.. Like premature shootings in tiolets.. I'll "kill yo' shit before it drops"!! Sociopathic!!.. I repetedly maul-and-gnaw.. It's similar to pornographic handjob how "this bitch'll box and suck"!!!!
You're tough?? I cut!!.. "Niggaz down to size" like amputations due to car-crashes!!.. The-thwack-slashes!!.. You aint smart, bitch!!.. brain?? A sharp instrument!!.. I'll stab this kid.. Have his body rot green till-cash-stashes!!!!
I'll mutilate-your-eyes, situate-it-inside a Highway Code Manual... you need "to see-the-signs"!!!! I spit-with-might!!.. The King of this SHIT.. And I need a Jester beside!!!! "Vexing the lowly*" like I type sanskwrit-scripts, whilst your messages are "lost in time"!!!!
Your shit is borderline!!.. between wack and stupid.. it lacks "wow", man-it's-use-less!!.. You got "played lines in development" like a foetus, kid, YOU'RE-TOOTHLESS!!!! B?? The doctor says, "You aint ill", so you'll struggle TO-PROVE-THIS!!!! better "back-track" like rewinds, 'cause the scold's-showin', like Babe without baseball.. This man IS-RUTH-LESS!!!!
My lyricism IS-FRUITFUL??.. Because I fail to be arrested for cock abuse-like-this-man.. You're far too obtuse,-trying-to-win!!.. Could call b a Ho, because I fuck the-tightness-of-this-man!!!.. Like when Jordan retired from that team, how you'll "loose the-mic-in-ya-hand"!!!!
My punch lines are "crazed".. Chase-away-aids-n-rabies.. THOU SHALT NOT-FUCK-WITH-ME!!!! You shooting blanks son, who needs vest??.. When I "slash caps" LIKE-SWORD-IN-KNEES"!!!! BEeeyotch!!!!

*low caste - sanskwrit is an indian language - and the untouchables were the outcast and consequently illiterate members of the population
*caps means bullets

12 minutes and you aint dropped what's up with that it's past 45 minutes kid... that would means dq..........................or some sortta penalisation

EASY MERk THIS VET>.ahahaha

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BrainSurgeon u just a fake veteren, frontin to be an established mc in in a week//
But i aint sweatin him, when ibust flows im lettin him wett his pants when i speak//
ya knew that, that’s why ya thought to drop first//
but I’m methodical I got more patience than doctors//
Check-yo style..."You fucked, a dead man'...
So you stay "underground like Necro'..., you'a"shady' cat, ain't crazy...that's just listenin to stan//
fuck some shanks and teks-bro...You'll get banned & I'm not even at my prime//
...Way to complex-bro, quit talkin...Type, don't make me waste my-time...//
Fuck that I've already had to waste-lines...On a win I already knowis-mine//
comin on the RB showin up to siccness.. thinkin you're savage.//
hit-kids wita quickness, you ain't nothin but average.//
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NIGGA QUIT YOUR BITCH MOVE AND DROP ALREADY 25 MINUTE KEYSTYLE... YOU SAID YOU WERE READY.... DOES IT TAKES SO FUCKING LONG TO DROP A VERSE.... I THINK YOU'RE CHEATING NOT DROP BITCH...PUT YOUR NAME WHERE YOU MORE MOUTH IS AND MAKE MY DICK STIFF

UPPin for honest votes...GOOD battel But i cant find ya rhyme schemme 'uppinmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmm

MY bad, thought you wasn't gonna drop.... .now upping for votes lets get you crackin........................................... ..........................

I was using multi's, the rhyme scheme's within the each bar

u usk plain an isipmple dont bich herbmmmmmmmm
uppin for more voters no d.r ridin i hat ethatttttttttttt
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