Original Rules:
10-16 lines
no dickride/crew/hate votes
u got til tomorrow tops to spit ima spit right away
3 votes to win
- Quick

yo here we go

my rhymes gon' be an air raid, when i spray clips that'll hit ya back bone/
inflict pain in ya torso, rip ya flesh, til ya sounds change from grunts to soft moans/
my lines like hard stones, stick a metaphor in ya back, so it short-circuits ya hormones/
turn from straight to fagget, then watch you and ya boy's groan/
i ain't kiddin wit you i spit lyrical projectiles, that scope out whack mc's from millions of miles/
jump over ya like darius, then clip ya brainwaves, how the fuck u gon' say i ain't got style/
use a pen n run wild, the ink'll put me on trial, murdered you with words gon' be put on my file/
this ain't no 8 mile, so ya actin ain't needed, put ya shit back in the right pile/
ya might live, prolly not tho cause ima start spittin a lil g thang/
kill ya twice over, then use the 9 to kill ya mang/
ya brain, ain't have the same power to maintain a new frame of mind/
ima lyrical genious who puts together similies, with great ease, n im a lil ahead of my time/
rewind back to the beginnin so i can un-"clot" the "blood" i left wit my clip/
i've taken out the back bone, n torso, so next im shootin straight at ya hip/

dressed up in black , skull under mask , im coming to fuckin get you/
leave a whole in your head , a tool in your chest and gas to your muscle tissues/
there are crimes in my life , this game you wanna play?/
go ahead roll them dice , where you stand is where you lay/
your waking up an shit , get tha fuck up you bitch/
catch tha chrome to your dome ( boom ) i aint new to this/
something that i thought you knew , digest this you fuckin fool/
screwdriver in your stomach its what im feeding you/
body into tub with a cup of gasoline , you could never handle this/
match in my hand with a mug that is mean , another crucifix/

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OK, here it is:

quickwitted came much harder, his rhymes and metas worked together to give an overall good picture of what he was tryin to say - and there were some pretty hard disses in there... good job

blood clot - work on ya punches, elevate and you can take some wins on this site too - drop some of the profanity, cuz that's just filler when you ain't got vocab aight? nice drop though


vote = quickwitted

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I gotta go with Quick witted

better flow dissing and wordplay

not bad guys
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