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Old 09-03-03, 05:38 PM   #1
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Sage Compilation

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This is a compilation of a bunch of shit I've been doing, and some older unfinished stuff that I mixed together.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/sagelyricistmusic.htm

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Old 09-03-03, 10:03 PM   #2
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good concept for a track, your voice is a little weird, a lot of "i'm so ill" type lines here, a lot of crazy multis, dint like the fade-out on the verses. kinda like book of rhymes but done by fabolous.

worth the listen.
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Old 09-04-03, 12:38 AM   #3
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word,, thanks for the feedback

by the way this is not really supposed to be a real track, just a compilation of a bunch of verses I've done... the intro's just from a song I did.

you are the first person that has said my voice sounds weird
now im sad

Thanks for the look

onE

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Old 09-04-03, 12:42 AM   #4
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this shit is hot damn, i want to get u on a song

see how this sound hit this up

www.soundclick.com/younggibandmizzonewhotband
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Old 09-07-03, 01:45 PM   #5
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word im always down for collabs just hit me up on aim

Sage Lyricist

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Old 09-07-03, 09:10 PM   #6
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Nice drop, you got some nice transitions in your style. I like the voice, I think you can stay on beat well, and have a good clear verse. Good job, keep bringing heat dawg, I really enjoyed the listen.

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Old 09-09-03, 01:22 AM   #7
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never heard this second verse.. interesting.. when you get a condensor mic ill make you free beats bitchass... never heard 3rd verse either... never he ard the 4th either lol... damn, alot of shit i aint heard... i can tell you.. nobody touches your flow... im tired pz..

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Old 09-09-03, 01:24 AM   #8
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omg that old ass aligned minds track.. i remember that shit.. DOPE!
Tip: Your sort of repetitive with the "Im the dopest" type shit. Fix that.
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Old 09-09-03, 03:04 AM   #9
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omg that old ass aligned minds track.. i remember that shit.. DOPE!
Tip: Your sort of repetitive with the "Im the dopest" type shit. Fix that.


look here you condensor mic mother fucker, it only sounds like im repetitive with it because I've got all these different tracks and verses laced into one so you hear my style on different beats. I got tracks where I dont talk about how ill I am and you've heard them.

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Old 09-09-03, 03:06 AM   #10
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oh yea thanks for your feedback sugar
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