your the type of girl i can see ta have ma kids..
got ma ass hype sneekin out at night ta ya crib..
i cant explain to my brain the things you did..
my time spent spent wit you this i shudna hid..

we've been through a lot together, good and nasty weather up an down heat like climite/
trying to stay focused but its so hard wit u on my brain simaler to armeggon an the comite/
it was scary cuz i didnt know what to do, i fell in love witchu within two weeks/
privlaged to have you in my arms, my lucky charm i love you sweet inacent fazeek/
k-r-i-s-t-y stay wit me until the day i die ths is a short document put into a la-lu-by/
you know you have my shoulder when you need to cry i promise i'll be ya pride inside/
never will i sin, a young'n try to harm you an i'll step in the pin i'll meet court again/
i will do everything i can to make you feel like im yo special man never let u b hurt begin/
elavatin my love day in an out your the only thing i seem to think about/
when im cought in'a drought an i cant write i turn to a pad an let my feelinz out/
i need you as much as the earth needs the sun my photosynasis my love has begun/
weak to strong sad to happy comma to alive the thing you do baby u got me sprung/
callen out yo name in the middle of my soccer game, juz to tell you im scoren the goal for you/
work hard tobe your insperation so you have somebody to brag bout by tha things i do/

im not a dope rapper but for you i'll try...
never leave the game until i feel ur satisfied...
do things witchu all the time i'll keep u occupied...
your wut i need my cure for u i will re-vive...

touched by an angel the day i was touched by my soul mate, you unlocked the lock opened up the gates/
told me i can elavate juz re-incarnate some new words an put em together dont be scared of mistakes/
abiotic love this will never be biotic my loves running through out my mind like the video game character sonic/
your as adictive as a drug dealer to kronic, im obsorbing not only heat but love from you think u were enderthermic/
even when im not around you i get catalyst, trading souls wit one another causing imagration/
love infantation help me increase the population i can easily say i love you wit no hesitation/
mortality in this life is uncountable thieft is rare my heart was stolen i hold you acountable/
reachin from a cliff to the sky never be reachable a logo in my arms my lil juliet symbol/
the radition between our etraction equals no subtraction we always laughin/
in my life who wud'a new summin like this cud happen my only reason for rappin/
i dont want anything in this relationship bad to happen, tell me if you eva feel trapped in/

im not to good wit lovw rods so baby try to understand...
my feelings inside are reaching out for your sweet hand...
i wonna be your man buy you that wedding band...
be the the guy to roll witchu on the warm sand...
i love you girl...i'll be your best man..fo real..

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

nice
i really liked this and felt it
good vocab
good flow

nice drop!
peace

thanks...uppen

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

same as krem said nice piece i liked it a lot oh and u forgot to poll vote on my battle so if u could hit that up w/ the poll vote that would be nice thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77608