yo yo yo
wit Bus im waitin at tha gate of Buckingham palace/1
focus on tha moon wit scientific theories of tha arouriborialis/2
I write so much im startin ta get calis/3
travilin from tha Archapeligo n go 3000 miles ta get to atlantis/4
then went ta dallas/5
ta watch the NFL cheerleader do they dances/6
while i watch them move i read books so my rhyme inhances/7
my vocab so enormous u would think i was Einstein/8
i walked to this faggit n battled him nine times/9
he prolly bit all my lyrics n didnt tell people that they were my rhymes/10
i can kick 100 bars n he can barely do 5 lines/11
im so Ill i make peoples foreheads become tha back of they minds/12
they'll prolly lock me up cuz to them 100 barz is 100 crimes/13
thats a hundred years for every bar that i did/14
and im only 16 so they gonna make me start as a kid/15
i cant do time now cuz at this rate i'll be old n ill have to rhyme out/16
u like an infant so im puttin you in time out/17
cuz u bad n u simply outta line/18
tryina battle me but u suck cuz u outta rhymes/19
so i cock back n watch my miniture missiles hitchu/20
they did an atopsy on u n said fuck it n left tha bullits in you/22
if u gonna win imma make sure imma win too/23
u a faggit hiddin that gay act u pretend/24
but if I can snap u once I can snap you again/25
but this time i DDT your ass n snapped you in ten/26
my verbs are nuclear missiles/27
while your word are the size television screen pixels/28
your body milted covered in liquid crystals/29
still couldnt make u shine/30
n u still wouldnt if i was in ya song n spit 10 lines/31
thats 5 bars if you didnt kno the rap mathmatics/32
so if i did 50 lines is that 100 bars that'll make me a rap fanatic/33
my tactic/34
is to make a electric forcefield so you cant attack this/35
the only way u could hold this is if u studied gymnastics/36
i could be the hunch back n u can have stones n still couldnt cast shit/37
while your verses come weak my verses come massive/38
an afta I compact 1000 of electrons i come for that faggit Drastik/39
he tried ta bring beef but i smash it/40
an blast him/41
he thought i was a joke an i watched as his ass chuckled/42
so i balled up n hit him in tha mouth with brass knuckles/43
and i started laughin as his as tumbled/44
Canibus and Rakim the two gods of rap/45
i know i'll be as good if i take a shot at that/46
i use my mind to write rhymes on a peice of paper/47
at night im the masked caper/48
and i never been known as a day bird/49
cuz im up at night ,sleep during tha day you gay bird/50
havent you heard that i was tha illest last July or May third/51
an you was the one everyone kicked to tha curb/52
cuz your word was destroyed by my olyptical verbs/53
im loaded wit two plasma rifles on top of two fiber optic radio active beams/54
im like freddy the way you sleep and I unannousivly crash ya dreams/55
you kept runnin but caught up to u an killed you in it/56
I sprayed you with opium smoke an i watched you choke as you died in less then a minute/57
if this was a battle its obvious that I would win it/58
your brains tha size of a peice of ice in a cooler/59
an its funny the way my brains the size of three geometric rulers/60
have you ever heard tha saying never judge a book by its cover/61
thats what everyone does to me and never my brother/62
they look at me and think i was a bum/63
they look at me and off the back just assume i was dumb/64
how it feel ta be proovin wrong/65
how it feel ta see me write a song more then 100 bars long/66
with no catch or hook/67
an nuthin about me bein a retched crook/68
too you this verse is not what it looks/69
to you its just another verse but to me its a verse that'll be in my archives/70
my lyrics goes in tha scripture and will be there for the rest of our lives/71
im out walkin the streets while ya'll hide your hives/72
and only come out the times ya car drives/73
and you try ta leave town/74
but ya car is rust, you can tell the way your engine makes that clinking sound/75
but then you realize ya car was outta gas/76
ya car takes 50 gallons a dollar fifty a gallon you do the math/77
cuz im the best rapper so kiss my ass/78

this is a long ass verse I typed a while ago so if you have the time then read it n tell me wut u think

jus want some feedback on my shit this is kinda old cuz i did it a while back but i jus wanted to see if peoples was feelin it or not maybe it was wack i dont know but some part are aight

tell me what ya'll think

erm, why do you want to be canibus soo much?



not only have you bitten a line you bitten a style.

hahhaa, not even worth reading all that if your gonna bite a style.
some lines where alright though:



actually i think iv heard this from poet laruatte 2 from 'rip da jacka'. ???hmmm???

keep elavating and be orginal

naw son he said fiber optics lens on my cd out next june or sumthin and he dont say im loaded

n i gave that first line to bus by say i was wit him its like adding on to his story or sumthin like in a movie to people spread up and it only shows what 1 person does well this is showin me instead of him u get it n i know u mean 100 bars if thats what u thinkin the styles from have u heard 33 threes well he got that song from something called 22 twos but made it 33 threes but he says in the song thats how he got it i was simply bored so jus wrote n kept addin on to this 1 so dont say i bite anything so i didnt bite anything from him and my style is combined with him and rakim cuz most every1 has the same style so thas whats up

actually u did bite a line

"wit a laser scope i put a red dot on your head like you hindu"

thats canibus's line.sorry but its tha truth,u got good vocab,and structure u just need your own style.keep elevatin.~1~

OH I DIDNT KNO I PUT THAT IN THERE MY BAD ILL DELET I WAS JUS TRYIN SOME STUFF CUZ I WAS GETTIN BORED SO I THREW THAT IN THERE I GUESS I AINT HAD NUTHIN TA SAY MY FAULT

^Biters should be banned.

^^honest mistake?

this is worth shit anyway
not like hes going to get
any fucking publicy n shit
no wut i mean?
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