I GOD~amnit the planetand granite!
if you say I aint granted the LORD of the mic Chord, id PERSECUTE you for Religious babelen- slanted-
The holy war begins in sin with me battlen in the Vatican.
Abuse your external till you collapsen-have you relapsen-
Maternal brother faternal father- get that ass a related smacken-
For lying like you aint wack and…..
serving me your bullshit, but i been fed- lyrically ahead-battle computers and
get in your HEAD –like a PSYCHOLOGIST PRE~MED’S.
ahead of my time there is no clocken- how I mix my Sprewell and Stockton, punchline and sock men -when I moch them- with the dochtren- of Johnny Cochren!
Fist fucken them fagget who claim they thuggen-leave em decomposen posen with maggets-buggen.
Am i threat?
I know crews- that recruit dudes- to battle me so I wont focus on dissing them too.
But they get beat to the beat on cue-when the sample breaks I francture fakes and stomp then till I drain a stain geno molocule.
Addicted to redicule.my world revolves around you jokes.
If you feel froggy ill beat you in the throat until you choke and croke.
bring the strongest words told-to every song I sold-
just to pen (pin) a written in bold,requires a Greco roman hold.
From the dome- I carry Trojan~HORSE~power that could invade ROME-and any hemispheric home-at the same hour regardless of time zone.
Prone to rip microphones, LOCAL OR ON ROAM-your cuming up limp-like kids that’s born impitent.
I am MAKENG KNOW CENTZ your rap is just infrigment.
im indinginent….cause its rair that I wont take there then everywhere-if you think me and the game don’t compare.
Try and play but if I sence something fishy you get felayed and frayed.
remove your nonsence-With your inners extracted like the mummification process-

UPPIN

That was a good verse, i liked how you came with that anger as if you were dissin all the fake kids an shit, that was dope, word play was great an your intro an outro were hot as wel;l...

I GOD~amnit the planetand granite!
if you say I aint granted the LORD of the mic Chord, id PERSECUTE you for Religious babelen- slanted-
that was a tight starter...1

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

THNKS PAPA IS IT GOOD ENOUGH TO MATCH THE OTHER VERSE

Yo i'd say slightly better than tha other verse,more wordplay which was real good here,multies and some very good vocab,liked tha hidden messages,as rule said good intro and outro,combined with tha other peice,it should be hot dawg.

Peace

pretty tight, like west sed nice multis but i didnt think u came off that creative. wernt really feelin da middle bit, but keep droppin

WHAT PART PAPA

aiyo... word... you in the OMENS now dawg?
if so... welcome to the crew dawgy/
A.T.

thnks it looks like i might be making that move

like I said dog...there'z a spot if ya want it...but damn...the 1st verse was so tight that ya had to make a even doper sequel...lol...and check ya PM'z...