checkin in, i guess i'll spit now




Morphine, that's an opiate, but right now we'll find out you're illiterate//
it's inconsiderate, they way i obliterate your stupid ass with the sickest shit----------------------2 lines(1 bar)

i came to confiscate a win from you, spin some sin on you, lyrically begin again to split your ass in two//
you come undone like glue when my hot style comes on through, like steam do because i'm leathally lyrically in fused to leave you bruised and abused melt the rubber off ya shoes-----------------4 lines(2 bars)

are you apalled at the way my unique keystyle has you stalled?//
the last emcee to fuck with me couldn't walk his ass home, he crawled, you just got mauled---------------------------------6 lines(3bars)

it's been a while since i battled but my words will leave you battered, like shrimp with your brains all scattered, like william shatner, shattered//
what's the matter, your ego seems much flatter, like your nerves just got splattered why your teeth start to chatter chew up your lip and leave it tattered----------------------------------8 lines(4 bars)


i guess it's easy to see you aint better than me, i'm the better emcee, doper than you but still dope free//
so i purge this morphine and like Jesus i nailhim to a tree, on this merkin spree i shoulda charged a fee cause it's knee deep from how i made him bleed but instead i left it free so all my public will agree, there's a reason RB still adores me

<center>...:eath Has Arrived::...</center>


This Chumps-Weak-In-Pursuit, Your "Falling Short" Like "Midgets In Jump-suit"//
Hes Stumped-And-Mute, Couldnt Be "Above My Words" If Your Verse Was "Acute"//
Maul-This-Gorilla, Im Apauled-An-Illa, You Write On the "Sixers Bench" Cuz Its All-"PHILA"//(filler)
Collide-In-Thrillers and Confine-Distellers, Your "Not Up To Pace", Like An "UnDecided-Miller"//
A Snooze-To-Oneself, Play "Hide N Seek With Remains", So You Can Trully "Loose Yourself"//
Use-Stealth-And-Bruise-Elfs, Like The "Spanish Language" Your "Recieving An EL"//
Played-Lesser When I Rage-Against-Vectors, You Wouldnt "Get Props" Being A "Stage Director"//
See Thru Sectors, He Weak That Will "Never Change" Like An "Empty Coin Collector"//
Your Getting Floored, Im "In control" of this battle like a "dismantled keyboard"//(Ctrl)
Illness Seeps Thru Pores, Your Winnnings "out-a-site" like If I Was To "ban this whore"//(Out A Site)

<center>...::Pick Yourself Up::...</center>

UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!

^^ thereis about five or six battle polls ahead of this one , we are getting slept on and most of that shit is ALL FUCKED UP BY SOME NEWb ..........
uppin, learn how to do this, all yall!

^^ vote, please. no votes after all this time, it's a two way street folks. i give feed back and votes, let's return the favor

UPPIN FOR VOTESSSSSSSS

Come on its been a while and no votes, if i could vote i would

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let's get a few votes, this shit is stalling us from new battles.
and by the way, RIP MR JOHNNY CASH, the man in black

bolth had good verses that i liked.
but honestly i thin roux got this one.

punches;roux
Flow:roux:
structure:roux
multis:roux

my vote: roux (sick flow)

it's been a while since i battled but my words will leave you battered, like shrimp with your brains all scattered, like william shatner, shattered//
what's the matter, your ego seems much flatter, like your nerves just got splattered why your teeth start to chatter chew up your lip and leave it tattered

and your a pussy, you dont understand shit. Roux got murdered
plus you dont have 100 posts. there was no breakdown at all, did you even read my verse you illeterate fuck. I murdered the kid

im gonna start battling like this

my name is john ill kill you with a bomb

and than maybe you bitches would vote for me.......

Come to streetverbalz get ya ass dealt with

ok ok this shit is getting slept on guys soi will be the first to vote i guess
honest breakdown as always

wordplay=morphine, like both but morphine had some pretty good wordplay

flow=tie, both had good flow, pretty consistent throughout both verses

personals=neither[b/] really had personals, roux used morphines name a couple times but that dont really count, so neither

punches=[b]morphine, gets this one, close but he edged roux out in punches

metas=morphine killt him in metas in my opinion, roux had some good ones but not enough

structure=morphine, liked the structure very easy to read and flowed nice

mulitis=roux,to be fair i read both verses again for this one and roux had more multis, it was very close though

complexity=morphine, nice vocab and metas help with the overall complexity of his verse

poll vote=morphine, close battle but morphine gets my vote, just an overall better verse, no hate and no beef to roux good shit from you too playa, but morphine came harder this time

good luck to both

holla

roux wasnt that great. decent vocab. nothing else really stood out.
morphine had an ok verse, better multies, better punches, better wordplay. nothing special but decent

Punches: Morphine
wordplay: morphine
multies: morphine
Vocab: roux
vote= morphine

uppin

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ko................................................ ..////////////////////////

Sorry fam, you ain't getting the KO. I found your verse to be very dumb..no hate...but the "midgets in a jumpsuit" and the "Phila" thing kinda spoiled the whole verse for me. THat's my grounds for the vote. Maybe I'm just too gutter for that type of verse but besides the flow was off. So to me, ova boy ain't WIN the battle, you lost to him with such a comical verse. And like I said, no hate.

Vote=Roux

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