:::.::.::.:Change:.::.::.:::

..::..:::ThugzDoCry:::..::..
What is change?..why do people change?, in certain circomstances?//

(Verse)
..::..:::ThugzDoCry:::..::.:
Tell me lord what it takes just to conquer the pain thats takin my reasonable thinkin over//
The nights i faced the dark sky, and the stars with a feelin o so sober//
Why did u make me open myself to the things that would made me selfdestruct?//
Im stuck, between love and hate, ..right and wrong//
Tears are disturbin my thoughts, i cant see clearly, like im trapped in a world i cant escape//
Multiple surroundins of people sufferd from murder and rape//
U heard of people who are misunderstood,..they want to scream but no one is there to listen//

(Chorus)
..::..:::Bash:::..::.
An Imortal soul Splurge out in every Goal I reach for//
Tears forming a Puddle on the Floor , Like birds cherpin and babys burpin//
My sigh sores threw the wind as if an unforgotin sin//
Traped in the rememberence of all it touched now the trouble begins//
Been through different changes in my Life//
Sometimes I had to Sacrifice different elements//
But there's no replacement//

(Verse II)
..::..:::ThugzDoCry:::..::..
My eyes closed, Im just 18 is it strange i cant place some things that ive been exposed to?//
Is it true, is this it?, cant i go back ne more?, ...//
When im old and a senior, will i than just now what this was what the pain all was for?//
And turnin back time aint an option, to bad if it was i would do it without hassitation//
Maybe i leaned to much on one thing, and filled it up wit mis-interpretation//
I Shud glue to gether the pieces of my heart, start all over again wit a new fresh start//
I was always searchin for tru love and if i found it i want it to be wit me for ever and to stay//
But i figured u let love into my life,gave me feelings i never had, just to take them all away?//
Hopefully i will survive this endless pain thats always inside, would there be a time i didnt ne more have to hide?//
Cuz i dont know if i'm capable, of resistin the pain thats flowdin towards me?,did u build me so i can survive?//
Or shall i carry this pain for ever,and just have to look back at this as just a piece of my life//
Before i leave one question, why did this made such an inpact on my life?//
Made me change in so many ways, ....//
I aint what i used to be, its even could be seen in the way i spend my days//
All i need is one good support, some one who would come to me wit a suggestion//
Before i leave, dear god would u only answer my one real burnin question...//

''Did u just gave me a heart..so it just could be broken afterwords?..''

(Chorus)
..::..:::Bash:::..::.
An Imortal soul Splurge out in every Goal I reach for//
Tears forming a Puddle on the Floor , Like birds cherpin and babys burpin//
My sigh sores threw the wind as if an unforgotin sin//
Traped in the rememberence of all it touched now the trouble begins//
Been through different changes in my Life//
Sometimes I had to Sacrifice different elements//
But there's no replacement//

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Word..........Bash is back to the open mics...........Anyways upping....................

Up^^

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that was ight

^^^^^^^^Nice feedback..................Upping

this was a keystyle^^,..its kinda poetic,.......rap,......its real slow.....some feedback

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this was an ill piece,good vocab,alright multis,good structure,good rythm,good structure,good chorus,got bash in this bitch, over all nice spit,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

This was a nice peace I was feelin it................................................ ......nice vocab and all that other stuff....................bash was nice..............nice to see ya back in the open mic scene

^^uppin

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Man...

Ya'll got alot on ya minds...

I read what I interpreted to be alot of "lost feelings" and "why" type of questions echoing in ya'll's heads.

Figures, being, what, 18 like ya said...
Ya'll gonna be full of wonder and have kinda "bleak" (for lack of a better word) expectations for what life holds when it already seems hard enough as it is.

Don't worry, it get's harder (life)...

But better if ya play the game right.

The love thing is to be expected, been there, done that when I was ya'll's age.
For some fucked up reason, even though love hardly ever means shit at 18, it feels like it means the world.
And when it goes wrong, it feels like the world is ending...

But it ain't...

Look at it this way...
Ya 18...if ya lucky, ya been fucking for about 4-5 years...
Most peeps die when they's 60, at least...

So...compare 4-5 years worth of fuckin ya done, to what, 55 years of fuckin that ya got left to do...

How can one bitch affect the rest of ya 55 years of fuckin...

She'll seem like just a small peck if ya look at it that way.

Great colab, guys...

Very enjoyable.

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^^ i cant say quite as much... but yea this was ill
bash i wish i could have seen a verse from you as well
thugs..the avy is ill

ok here we go.. the overall flow was good, bash had the chorus on lock... thugs i lked the 2nd verse more.. it looked like the 1st was an idea but you built up momentum and blew up the 2nd..

vocab was hot in all places, definetly hot!

if ya would be so kind
my 1st collab:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134
Open mic:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529

Well im fuckin for 7 years l-o-l


but she means allot to me, ...cuz i never loved, only fucked around and played..., she walks in my life,....and we was to gether for like 1 and a half year , some shit, .....and broke up.....feels fuckt up....she was the first gurl i didnt saw as potential pussy lol^ a well it feel good expressin tru music, ...olso audio, ...for/about her....lol, ....but its still a big questopn why she touched me the way she did^, i think i still dun know it when im 60^..but fuck it....shit happens

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Okay Okay...

This was a tight collab, usual stuff from bash and thugz

Both styles work well together, good topics, flow blah blah

My advice to both of you would to be to up your vocab, that seemed to lack on this piece but didn't seem to detract from the piece

But i know thugz lives in holland..so its a bit awkward

but...

Good read...up

^^Lol, wants american citizonsship back^^and my american vocab^^^lol

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