time passin, stuck wit rhyme passion, fuck six times mashin, bust six nines splashin//
blood on clean polo attire, now i fiend solo to get-higher, too you teen homos i spit-fire//

so u faggots-will-melt, im stabbin-ya-health, whos laughin-in-hell, im strappin-wit-shells//

prepared to flare on anybody that stares, but when you get older you dont really care, by then no friends to share//

information and gossip, sense-you-hatin so watch-it, let me pinch-your-fate-n-drop-it//

watch it shatter like shitty-glass, aint nothin phatter than city-ass, aint none of that gritty-grass//

just light-green and nice-dreams, on tha street i have to fight-fiends,this might-mean//

that tha hood is dangerous, never could come hang-wit-us, we all split apart after tha game-hit-us//

and sucked us into tha cycle, not organized crime that requires rifles//

i need an automatic, somethin thats not-sporadic, like me when i thought-i-had-it, then lost-my-gadget//

complex machinery, thats some next-shit-ass-greenery, smoked it and it could have been hydro atleast it seemed-to-be//

seems-to-me that theres bad resolution, negative messages pollutin our revolution//

kids and gangstas shootin so we always loosin.

hot shit...I like the multi's you used...I've alwayz loved a good multi...they really help the flow out in my opinion...you had some nice vocab in this piece too...by the way...ya think you can check out my piece in Sacred Scriptures?????? My battle'z against Evolve so it should be good...

uppin for replies^^^^

yo tight rhyme diverse. good use of muliti's and vocab, rhyme scheme was pretty tight and the flow was down pact. keep spittin bro oh and make sure to check out mine and masta C's new drop called "high times" leave some feedback. thanx in advance peace.

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Actually this was a pretty decent key...

The multis were hella forced tho man, ya shit made a lil sense... ya topic fell off, but your creativity was kinda there... your rhymescheme was awsome tho!! your flow was hot dawg...

no metas n no similies... cant count those...

this shit was nice tho,,, it was definatley a key tho

peace.

feeling this one to man...
loving that flow... lol...
Good rhyme scheme and all...
I liked the wordplay...
shit was cool for a keystyle...
Guess that's why it didn't have much concept to it...
keystyles are like that... lol... still showing skill though...

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i was feelin it man,

'blood on clean polo attire, now i fiend solo to get-higher, too you teen homos i spit-fire//'

that was pretty nice, you had nice lines in there man, and flow was on point.