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Old 09-24-03, 11:06 PM   #1
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Street Life

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Street life in all of us isnt it obvious
that we all growen up bein outragious
lettin feelis over come our physical bein
let things betry us causin hell ta reigm
lettin the pain begin all for a pleasure
actin like street aint lifes treasure
but wut gives you a buzz better
wen you caught in'a struggle
dawg cant talk he on'a muzzle
lost pieces to lifes crazy puzzle
realizing nothing exactly fits
Street life lez u c thru tha mist
lettin you receal emotions that do exist
let the braisn get ripped
wen yah talkin shit
street life a 7 day church
ya it hit wen yah hurt
blessed by the game
where wud i be wit out the street name
restricted
underground
lyrical
epic
streets everything but neglected
so when you think things get down an rejected
think about the street like that we protected


...just some bullshit i felt like spitten no flow really but meah...feed back please
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Old 09-25-03, 12:27 AM   #2
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hmmm......the title threw me off because the first few lines were a little hazy........even though you used the words street and life in them..........this was very close to being a self portrait in a way......i like the way you spoke about the streets without degenerating into a thug........pretty good piece
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