Sureal: Not on site, but posting for collab cuz your my boy...
The Realist: Dont stay out too long

Sureal
Half Nouns, Frowns From Being Shot Down.
Soul Drowns, From Time To Time You Rebound.
Heart Pounds, Leaving You And Love Apart Now.
Start Sounds, This Really How The Smarts Found?.
Called Collect, Of Course The Charges I Accept.
Hearts Direct, Soon To Be Alone And Wrecked.
Eyes Project, Pain Doubled When She's Correct.
Tears Reflected, Loss Of Life's Most Respected.
Unexpected Twists And Turns Feel Neglected.
UnProtected Lies Leave My Frail Mind Infected.
Cross Section, Look At The Mirrors Reflection.
Wrong Direction, Can't Live Up To Her Perfection.
Misguided Affection, Leading To Abrasive Rejection.

The Realist
Does this apathy epidemic have to spread like an infection
When I look around I suspected this is all due to rejection
Was it probable I thought there wasn’t an obstacle I couldn’t topical
Rap saved me from lots of bull, but I knew I couldn’t top it all
Try my hardest failing isn’t an option when you’re the smartest
Self help, helps me delve into this heart felt am I going through hell
Can you tell how bad this hand I was dealt, life didn’t give me a belt
How can I wear the pants, plans get slashed, everything I hold melts
Why should I keep going, does the all knowing have to keep me glowing
Am I missing much even when his gifting touch made me stop blowing

Good shit...

Sureal killed this...

Crazy flow...

Good from realist as well...

Good shit...
Period...

Yeah this peice was pretty good, It was a good read, Both had good flow, and vocab i thought, Sureal did great with his lyrics, Realist did good too i thought, keep dropping.

Good flow here....superb on the multi's althouth I felt ya'll could've dove into the subject matter at hand a lil more...other than that it was a good piece.

good work from both, both did well - stayed on course and mixed well with each others styles.

good work.

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LowerTown's Finest

this shit is hott!!
no bull shit cuzz
this is something someone like me can relate too
Holla back
*Trial*

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that was good shit, both of ya ripped it. the vocab, wordplay, and multis were hella good. the flow was on target, and overall id say that shit was fuckin dope.

hey yo realist, thanx for postin a reply on my post

peace.....

Both hit with a dope flow, surreal stayed hot and realist hit wit some good similies, multis were ill and rhyme scheme was good as well... good read stay up dunnies!

i was mos def feelin this shit.....you both had some ill azz lines and multi's, hot shit!!! good looks on the feedback fo my shit, 100

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" You all will never be forgotten and your spirits live within us all!!! R.I.P*"


" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

Sureal
Called Collect, Of Course The Charges I Accept.dopeline
i dunno i really didnt liek your content, cause it was
just all flow sorta, i mean some of it was alrtie i suppose
umm flow was the best aspect of your verse, sorta short
i reckon, u should've concentrated more on your flow,
your style was nice, approach was original u were on topic,
but i still think u were concentrating on flow tooo much.....

The Realist
"Was it probable I thought there wasn’t an obstacle I couldn’t topical
Rap saved me from lots of bull, but I knew I couldn’t top it all" very very off topic
ur flow was alrite, content was 7.9/10, well i dunno,
u were sorta off topic, ur style was original, at least
u didnt go for all flow like sureal/////////////////////////


overall
both of u should've gotten a stronger opner/ender
flow was good, content was decent, nice job
u complimented each other's styles welll.................

Good collab you two. The flow was on point. Good use of wordplay, it was profound. It was just the right size, you kept it short and sweet. You both complimented eachother like triplicity said.

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What the fuck is this?

yeah...never really seen Sureal come like this....he did great....
good job

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hot shit mane.like it a lot.cold.holla


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