high-priced merchandise, after italian gourmet im burpin-spice, two emcees and im merkin-twice//

blindin wit diverses-ice causes rhymin wit tha first-device, i curse-and-slice wit my verbs-that-splice//

i snap-ya-spine and trap-ya-mind, u actin mean ill slap-ya-kind, wrap-ya-lines wit tha last-define rhyme that collapses-time//

burnin tha grains-of-sand, yearnin to change-tha-plan, my range-is-bland, you clame-you-ran, like all female racists i banged-tha-clan//

im placed-in situations, everyday facin my hearts racin, my steps make echoes cause im pacin, my paitence is vacant cause im tired of waitin//

blatant-and-rude, statin-im-crude, but never state that im breakin-youll-loose, just for fakin-tha-blues//

you actin depressed, i contest-to-stretch-ya-vest wit bullet holes at best, dont flex, my sets- complex, i invest-in-sex//

emcees are plagued wit confusion, my words give contusions, causin cotton mouth and illusions, your intrusion leaves bruises, fuck wit me and your loosin//

what do you think that your proovin by yappin-ya-lips, im strappin-wit-clips just to start attackin-ya-click, then im snappin-ya-bitch//
I OUGHTA SLAP YA!!! laughin-and-shit, u humor-me, only consumers-see, what kinda fume-you-breath, and tha tune-you-speak//

i crack-ya-wit-whips, then stack-all-my-chips, a soulja throwin-boulders no-ones-colder see this solar-eclipse//

wit my advantage i manage to damage-your slander, abolish-this from my grips and polish-tha-tips then i see amber//

a cutie-pie usually-high when ever i see her i go for tha booty-why// its merely attraction-thats-physical, just a fraction-thats-digital, quit askin-ya-pitiful//

hot multies twin nice lil meaning less drop...lol peep my 119 and webo productions peaces i need critiques from the big dawgs

I thought that was fuckin' pretty good even tho I didnt understand much it looked like it was just for sho.

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yea it was,still uppin

uppin^^^^^

nice multis, meaningless drop tho lolol

but goodshit

peep ma open mic man

Yeah this was a good peice, good read, your multies were good, you had good flow also, content was good as well, overall id say it was a pretty good drop, keep dropping, and if you get the chance check one of my pieces out with gene pool called Suicidal Tendicies.thanks.

Multiple Words Of Nothing... The Best Part Of That Verse Were The
Hyphens

if you dont like my piece dont come in my fuckin thread spreadin negative messages hoe.

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i already did once but i just thought of something if you wanted to this could get a lil editing and actually mean something look at it im not blind if you listen to aesop rock rappen an read this you can almost catch a meaning.....damn this hern im lit!!!!!!!!!uppin

let me up this for you man... lol...
Once again, I'm feeling the formula...
loved the wordplay and flow...
shit was topicless like you said... thas aight...
I'm still waiting for some meaningfull shit... lol...
nothing bad to say bout this....
Keep doing your thing dawg...

Peace

Ehhhhhh, i didnt really liked this, anyone can post a load of multi's together that mean nothing, wheres the skill in that? Flow was off as i read it, bars were too stretched, no imagery, no direction, no writers voice, just multi syllables strung together so you could brag about it.

Thats not even an open mic = /

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