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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-08-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-10-03

Winner Is In The League & Off Probation
Loser Is Out Of League

In i guess^


Im goin ten^

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im in

sorry kid but you cant be in the league, watch as I show this vet
matta fact you could be saddam at a photo shoot and couldnt `pose a threat`
get retarded when I smash ya face, ya raps a waste
cuz you couldnt be `on a roll`, rappin for `Land O Lakes`(butter company)
in lethal lyricist combat, i maul this cat, it aint no small fact
just fall back, Edicius its a step up for you to be wack
my presence at large got you in the corner and claustrophobic
thinkin outside the box i left your body in... yall know it
mary jane the lethal lyricist, mission to seek and destroy
like the `24/7 bully` I seen the `week(weak) in this boy!`

I drop tommorow O_o Sleepy now,

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ok

Blah!

With ur lips made to suck... battle ur not meant to do,
tossin my name backwords is the only thing left for u.
sexy, who?? more like a heroine junky.. cock suckin slut,
no need for Mary Jane to retire.. this Weed is getting Cut.
no chance for you to elevate.. your stuck here for a while,
bitches like u are hopeless...they keep comin wit a newb style.
with ur purple lips & fake eyebrows.. a standard breezah bacardi,
but this is even more fun cuz i never in life saw a hiphop barbie.
J Products must have judged ur pic.. then let u in their crew,
so hey.. i guess there's still hope,
when you consider what make-up & photoshop can do.

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Vote Edicius

Honestly.. i thought mary jane's first 4 lines were played as
fuck... the pose a threat line i wasnt feeling becuase i felt it 10
years ago when i first heard it.. the the Land o Lakes was wack..
Edicius came decent... the flip his name punch wasnt bad.. & the
Mary Jane weed line was aight... he edged her out by a little

Hmm... Edicius takes this...

This shorter format worked well for him...

Takes it on punches and personals...

Much nicer than you've come before in league...

TDC changed his stlye!

Mary Janes punches were blah...they really seemed
to have no effect...TDC first four lines i belive took
the battle...cuz the rest of his line were nothing
special but still indeed enough to take the battle. . .

Vote = ThugzDoCry

Man TDC u really elevated since that time we battled...I got to give it to you on this battle u came more original, Like Volve said MJ spit a lot of played shit, and then she used newb tactics (Quotes).....

Vote = TDC

I spit good at peeps ho edge me like evolve,chrit,...lol^


i dun care bout battlin , ..i want the elevation,...but its not from u

Im open mic ^^topical,....

Up last vote^

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yea i think TDC got this one also.....he stayed....

more consistent throughout his verse.....

and had some decent punches......

MJ's verse was played as fuck....and i really......

wasn't feelin it at all.....so my vote goes to.....

TDC.....

decent battle..stay up..

yep..
pz....

TDC was that you.....?

if it was very nice.
u took this battle on all categories....
the shorter bar format worked well the pic
disses were nice just overall a betterverse..
mary jane need to up on the talent to get
thru here ......

vote-TDC

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MerK SquAd.

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