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checkin in, verse to be dropped by midnight per your rulez

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check it:

the only fan you got is when you swing your arm in a circle
I'll have you laughin at yourself until your face turns purple
I'd say suck my dick, but you always got your own in your jaw
that leaves plenty of room, but I never share when hittin it raw
I see you slippin and bust a CAP - CALM, like nobody saw
you better hope they don't, you might get away with a draw
You're like people at the self-serve pump, gassin yourself up
your dick's to small to hold pants, better fasten your belt up
it looks funny when you sag and the crack is up in the front
next time you battle me, better prepare your verse for months
I make you nautious, so there's no way you could eat me up
I have you dyin off my shit like your name was Luke Keemia


out

There aint shit about this bitch thats fantasic or Spitacular
The simple minded Bafoon hasn't even mastered our venacular*
Spitacular what's really good homey? Did U even Try?
Becuz Every single punch u threw missed me or Flew By
U knew I was comin hard, aimin to smash ya verse completely
But with that wack shit u spit^I can merk U silent & discreetly
Naw fuck that, I'ma spit loud and let this Merk be Heard
Spitac is wizzack, Should of kept his mouth shut & thats word!!
You wack Herb....People Like You make me angry Got Damnit
I'll play the earth's hygenist & wipe you off the face of this planet
How u managed to even get 7 wins I'll never know
Cuz only D/R's vote for someone w/o punches or flow

blah.....vote it up



*For those who dont know, Venacular means ones native tounge or everyday used language

ayo Cap dude, Ive seen you come harder than this b4 yo, i think u underestimated ur opponent

Opener = Cap
Flow = Both
Punches = Spit
Wordplay = Spit
Finisher = None

Vote = SPit

both verses wasnt so hot to me, atleast all this is strictly in my opinion

hit these up

forgot to leave the link, hit enter too fast

Bionicle VS C-Drama
Lyrical Cyanide VS C-Drama

LoL You show me some wordplay in his verse and I wont count ya vote as a D/R vote LoL............................................... ...............
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Uppin, Man lets get some real MC's to vote in here please.

opener:capcom
closer:capcom
wordplay:capcom
punches:capcom
flow:tie
structure:tie



ill lines:
capcom:You wack Herb....People Like You make me angry Got Damnit
I'll play the earth's hygenist & wipe you off the face of this planet
~nice~

spitacular:You're like people at the self-serve pump, gassin yourself up
your dick's to small to hold pants, better fasten your belt up
~second line wasnt as hot~


aiight


peace

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opener -cap
metas - tie
complexity/vocab - tie
wordplay -cap
punches -cap
flow -cap
structure -tie
closer -cap
overall -cap

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yo cap quit downplayin my votes bitch

this was a fair battle but you gotta yak it up after every vote, just shut your trap

your verse was basic and THAT'S WORD

^How Bout You suck my dick bitch......I'm entitled to my opinion and I can say w/e the fuck I want....If I wanna say ya momz an ugly whore I can say it and it aint shit u can do about it pussy...

Now back to the matter at hand.......Vote up people