500 post to vote only please

10 lines
drop one hour after checkin
no crews
no hates
no d/r
explain votes please
no free postin
no "i will vote when you hit up mine" bullshit either
vote then drop the link

check in playa
i'll start after you checkin

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checkin
cool drop in one hour or less^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^

ok haven't battled in a while so we'll see what happens
quick ten liner



...I’m focused....
...and this win is hopeless no need 4 postin...games over like u ran outta Tokens...(<---a.k.a The Remix, gave him only lose)
...seen your ryhmes and all u proved is that shit can come from both ends...
...I deploy spits...and by the way thats not a mic its one of your rubber toydicks...
...no lube to ride so resorts to getting fingered more than playstation joysticks...
...been yappin bout nothin..and as fearless and volcanoes lackin eruptions...
...rap habits disgustin...didn’t know they cloned wackness in massive productions...
...this kids gettin clowned...entered ya name in search but his rep neva found...
...marchin around claimin he’s ill in a hospital gown...
...my lyrics are lethal...avi looks like you reppin da robotic village people...
...Tha Remix starred in your first lose...DaCurse just directed the sequel...



still got a few extra minutes
holla
explained votes people

...I’m focused....
...and this win is hopeless no need 4 postin...games over like u ran outta Tokens...
...seen your ryhmes and all u proved is that shit can come from both ends...
...I deploy spits...and by the way thats not a mic its one of your rubber toydicks...
...no lube to ride so resorts to getting fingered more than playstation joysticks...
...been yappin bout nothin..and as fearless as volcanoes lackin eruptions...
...rap habits disgustin...didn’t know they cloned wackness in massive productions...
...this kids gettin clowned...entered ya name in search but his rep neva found...
...marchin around claimin he’s ill in a hospital gown...
...my lyrics are lethal...avi looks like you reppin da robotic village people...
...Tha Remix starred in your first lose...DaCurse just directed the sequel...




had to make a quick edit
i bolded the word i needed to edit so u can see i didn't change anything else
no big deal

.| is it still ok to post? |.
.| sorry i'm late |.
.| NetZer0 kicked me off |.
.| had to restart my cpu |.
.| how it's still ok thouh |.

fine wit me i aint gone bitch, just dont pull a no show
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.| no response |.
.| well i'm gonna post anyway so here we go |.


.| it's like u cripwalkin on mindfields the way u dancin with death, i'll shoot thru ya chest |.
.| heres DaCurse best enlightenment toward me: Damn! he i'll, screw the rest |.
.| like bitches with a bad itch, i suggest u flea....thats what i mean kid |.
.| last time ur rhymes were red(read) was with ur signature image between it |.
.| Curse? please, ur never placed with vets, so before u get ate i'll let u taste the threat |.
.| ur a waste of breath, cus what u say'll get no air like asthmatic space cadets |.
.| embrace this fools message? how about i rip his game like cool presents |.
.| wipe him off the board like teachers with no space for new lessons |.
.| let me serve him, mods ban this fuck, the kid is useless who cares |.
.| u scared a me!?...Curse'll be out...like deafs in musical chairs |.

good shit bio, lets get some feedback please
explained votes...........this is uppin #111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

aight i gotta break this down not that i want to but it needs to be done coz tha shit was close................
punches=curse
sustainment=curse
flow=tie
metas=curse
origanality=bionicle
vocab=bionicle
overall=curse....felt his punches more

hit this up..............
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...lyrical+cyanide

aight cats i voted on this battle so can one of you peep the batttle in tha thread above............................................. .............

I say Bionle got this..he had alot of wordplay...but..when you dropped your link in my battle Bio..you didnt say I need 500 posts to vote..so oh well..good battle..Bio just came out by an inch..no..by a centimeter..thats how close it was..Dacurse had alot of personals and that is what battles are all about..my Bio was just to ill..peace...and someone please hit up the battle that is in my sig...please!!!!

.| thanks for your opinion though |.
.| worth havin it |.
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Originally posted by DaCurse
...I’m focused....
...and this win is hopeless no need 4 postin...games over like u ran outta Tokens...
...seen your ryhmes and all u proved is that shit can come from both ends...
nice start
...I deploy spits...and by the way thats not a mic its one of your rubber toydicks...
...no lube to ride so resorts to getting fingered more than playstation joysticks...
lol the concept of gay lines is always in battles, people have even said this concept about me, so played
...been yappin bout nothin..and as fearless as volcanoes lackin eruptions...
...rap habits disgustin...didn’t know they cloned wackness in massive productions...
nice
...this kids gettin clowned...entered ya name in search but his rep neva found...
...marchin around claimin he’s ill in a hospital gown...
this coulda ben phrased different but its ok
...my lyrics are lethal...avi looks like you reppin da robotic village people...
...Tha Remix starred in your first lose...DaCurse just directed the sequel...
was personal so nice closer



Originally posted by .|Bi0niclE|.
.| no response |.
.| well i'm gonna post anyway so here we go |.


.| it's like u cripwalkin on mindfields the way u dancin with death, i'll shoot thru ya chest |.
.| heres DaCurse best enlightenment toward me: Damn! he i'll, screw the rest |.
nice wordplay, it was origional
.| like bitches with a bad itch, i suggest u flea....thats what i mean kid |.
.| last time ur rhymes were red(read) was with ur signature image between it |.
personal and nice
.| Curse? please, ur never placed with vets, so before u get ate i'll let u taste the threat |.
.| ur a waste of breath, cus what u say'll get no air like asthmatic space cadets |.
lmao that killed it
.| embrace this fools message? how about i rip his game like cool presents |.
.| wipe him off the board like teachers with no space for new lessons |.
nice
.| let me serve him, mods ban this fuck, the kid is useless who cares |.
.| u scared a me!?...Curse'll be out...like deafs in musical chairs |.
nice closer with a flip of wordplay

Yo this was a tightass fuckin battle...For real. I read DaCurse's verse and was like..."Damn! How's Bi0nicle gonna overpower this shit?"...But then I read it and saw what he brought. Just readin his verse you could feel the tension and shit...Bars that were just full of tight wordplay. DaCurse got him on his 3rd bar and personal steez...But Bi0nicle came out breathin fire in with some origional shit...But taht space cadet line killed it for me. Mos def enjoyed this read...

Rico. Votes For Bi0nicle