.:First Of All I Know Young Prophet...And He's Not A Real New-b:.

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no crew.
no hate.
NO D.r.
no biting
no recycling

.:U Drop First...Since U Made The Call-Out:.

This freak is not no criminal/
He should be arrested alone 4 bein so subliminal/
His flow is irate, the worst of the worst/
He aoutta be rockin-rap, like his boy Freddy Durst/
This nigga just a camel-toe bitch ass/
You tryin to square up wit me, you'll be kissen grass/
His name is Judah Budah, a lil gay child from Soladudah/
Too bad his raps suck and are nuttin but POOdah/
You may think his rap is better than mine, but y'all can't smell da crap/
He's gotta fucked face and he thinks he's from da hood, so he's destined to rap/
Nigga you live in tha bad part of town/
All that does not explain no hood, your house is just broken down/
He may have his own beats, but I got exclusive rhymes/
Nigga you broke as hell, lemme give you quarters and nickel-dimes/
None of those doller bills, cuz you'll just try and shank/
Your so POOR nigga your mom's don't even have her own BANK/
But Im done here, Juda justa discrase/
You and your mom, just cuz y'all have da same face//

# Your so poor, your mom don't even have her own BANK(account)

Im fixen that up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iight YOung AKA Bezzie AKA da dick ryda AKA shut tha fuck up

i'll drop in like 15 min

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Little Dick Ryda...Dis Fag's Real Name Is Clayton "Da Fag" Brady/
U Might Know His Mom, In Da Hood She's Known Has Da Bag Lady//
Dis Niggaz Couldn't Get Sick, Even If He Fucked A Bitch Wit H.I.V./
If It Was Up To Me, I Would Let Dis Nigga Rot Wit Da 9/11 Debris//
Where's Ya Structure, And Where The Fuck Is Ya Lyrical Flow/
Fake Prophet, Ur Names Only Half True, Cuz Ur Just A Young Hoe//
U Couldn't Make A Hit, Even If Mahamad Ali Gave U Boxing Tips/
Rockin Scripts, Cause U Can't Freestyle Through Yo Floppin Lips//
Clayton Why Did You Wanna Battle Me, Ur Mom Wants To Saddle Me/
A Quickin Merkin And Ur First Loss Is All That'll Be, I'll Rattle Thee//


Explainations:

8th line-Floppin Lips...He Got A Big Ass Bottom Lip

uppin 4 votes

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Vote-Doc J

PUnches: J
Flow: Both
Metas/Similes: J


^All that maters, Vote--------> J Doc

Yo doc since u the only guy who can vote please hit this up with an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85248

this was a blowout dr.j took dis wit ease.

metas=doc j
wordplay=doc j
personals=doc j
punches= doc j
creativity=doc j

my vote=doc j

a peeps hit dis wit a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84883

uppin 4 votes

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this was one-sided too---young that verse was weak dawg---ya had sum disses--but the flow sucked---dr j ya had a good flow--couple aight punches---good structure---and obviously beat this kid----vote=dr j

another one sided battle, doctor j easily takes this.....heres my breakdown.....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-j
wordplay-j
punches-j
personals-j
overall-j

props to the both of ya, but ima say j takes this easily......

peace.......

uppin 4 votes 3



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j got this hand down he blew that cat away

metas=doc j
wordplay=doc j
personals=doc j
punches= doc j
creativity=doc j
structure-tie
played shit:young
my vote=doc j.........by a mile...............

Thankz kid but i need people who can vote

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