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10-12-03, 12:18 AM
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there is no hope with death
IP: DE1B 40B8
im sick wit a twist, the ex-rated exercist, ripp your limbs off your ligements and hand your man your cartilage and your bloody timberlands/ have your ass screaming/ "Somebody Please Call An Ambulance" "Get me a Paramedic"/ shouldn't have fucked wit reaper and his smith and wesin/ any more questions/bronx my heat into your intestants/ any contestants/ i'll clap ya'll with an affirmative action
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10-12-03, 01:08 AM
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IP: B910 8CBB
nice..spit
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10-12-03, 07:11 PM
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IP: DE1B 40B8
thanx for the detailed remark
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10-12-03, 07:20 PM
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IP: 63D7 39EF
Well...you should put your lines under each other so it looks better and so its not in like a blob or whatever...and try to keep them the same size about...flow was alright...up your vocab a little bit...try adding some multies and internals...but it was a ok drop....keep at it..and keep dropping.
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