Skiddz:
Different Personalities, takin over Fake Forms of Reality/
How Can My Other Self, Take Pride In Battling Me./
Control Of My Body?Yes?Maybe For Some Soulful Wealth/
But Control Of My Heart?No? Thats on A Different Scale/
Because If We Battle Ourselves, Our Death is Here Beforehand/
And We'll Leave Mother And Father Like A.M, Leave 'em Mourning/

SkiddLeZZ:
Maybe Its Tainted To Me, The Way Reality Leaves/
How Its ColdHearted, Leaving Unsurprisingly/
My Time Is Vexed, My Heart Is Losing Track Of Pulses/
It Seems To Late For A Problem, When You Finally Take Notice/
We Seem To Oblige Our Commitment To Self/
Where If We Were Unselfish, We'd Care For Health/

SkiddZ:
But Maybe not, The Body is in Our Own Crucifixes/
Living In Unison Helps, But It's Not that Simplistic/
My Body Drowning In Pain, Feeling All ways To Be hurt/
If I Once Had Control, I Find It All too Hard to Revert/
But Contemplations happen, My Ecstacy Released/
By Rapping, But When I'm Done I Find it Hard to Sleep/

SkiddLeZZ:
I FInd IT Hard to Sleep, Our Bodies Back iN War/
You Can't Explain It, De Ja Vu? I Saw it Before/
The Death And The Destruction goin on in a Person/
I Can't See Much More, But It Seems Like Rehearsin/
Doin The Same Drill Everyday Till The Stage Is All Done/
I See My Body Dying, The Day is Near,Should I be Stunned/
We Going to Persish, Due To Selfishness In Our Hearts/
But Is There ANyway, That Our Death We Can Retard?/

The Life Is Almost Over, I Feel it In The Heart/
But Maybe There's A New Beginning, A New Start/


S.DoT.KiddZ...lol

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yeah for the most part that was some tight shit dawg the vocab was of da hook and the multiz and flow were tight well i look forward to readin mo

that wasnt bad homie, the vocab and wordplay were both exceptionally good, for the most part ur content and topic were pretty damn original, overall id say that was some good shit, and before now ive never read ur shit, but now that i have ill be lookin for ya.

peace.....

nice drop like got love sed nice worplay and vocab


an that was a good concept
jus keep droppin an i'll peep it if i get chance

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good peice, i liked the way the wordplay and internals an shit were brought out, the flow was tight, everything suited good in place...well done

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that was good for the most of it
keep postin i wana read more
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