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Old 10-13-03, 11:24 AM   #1
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BTK VS COM (Probation Match)

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Winner Is In The League...
Loser Is Out Of The League For Good...
BTK.. This Is Your ONLY Chance!!!

Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03

First To 5 Wins

Good Luck....
 
Old 10-13-03, 12:13 PM   #2
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TDK?

What am I, a tape?

Checkin in, my man...

my bad.. i fixed it

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Old 10-13-03, 03:36 PM   #3
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checkin in but why have i been put on probation??
 
Old 10-13-03, 03:37 PM   #4
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Because your verse last week was borderline wack...
Step it up or you are out...
 
Old 10-15-03, 11:43 AM   #5
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Spittin like Xanex and Valium cuz I'm bringin the Com down...
Being a Diamond his brain's so dense light actually bends around.
Found yaself on probation, beat me twice but ya really no better...
So after this L marks, ya be Moore like Demi with a different letter.
Outta desperation, ya gave ya left arm ta text without a flaw...
But you can't use the gift given, cuz dumbass you's a southpaw.
And ya complexity vexes me cuz it's like curls in straight hair...
Like toilets in stores that ban Jackasses, the 'shit' just ain't there.
Lemme spit like bubblegum, give YOU complexity ta chew on...
But this human being in a defining moment is a complete oxymoron.
So ya verse like John Wayne Gacy cuz ya crawl ta fill space...
Brought to ya knees tryin ta squeeze ideas from behind ya face.
And ya bitch skanky I've heard, but ya go down all she wants...
Despite the fact she wipes her ass from goddamn back to front.
Wrecked ya face driven ta suicide cuz ya far from a know it all...
Downed cardiac nitro pills thinkin ya'd explode runnin inta walls.
So I've told ya story with pushpin disses stickin to ya for laughs...
And it was simply child's play the way I penned a tale on this ass.
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Old 10-15-03, 05:50 PM   #6
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I'll slice your body with a razor, extract the blood from your chest
Like the gash on your forehead, i'm a cut above the rest
You'd better button up your vest or you'll let your only guard drop
You even said you loved me, man this ain't a lonely heart spot
Like a phoney plastic hard cock... you can't elevate no more
You'll have to get David Blaine to help levitate your score
They'll celebrate this war, sit and learn from the pure
Your life's adjurned when i skewer,I'll burn your urn to be sure
You take your punches and bleed them until they can't breath
You'd get run over by a plough and still ain't seeded in the lead
Concede from fatigue in the league you fade to the back
So many holes in your rhymes its like i sprayed with a gat
This guy was made to be jacked It suits him when i rob him
An tight MC from where?.....Houston we have a problem
 
Old 10-15-03, 10:40 PM   #7
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holy fuck

this was a borig ass battle

vote com cuz of tha cut above tha rest line
 
Old 10-16-03, 04:30 AM   #8
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Edit:
Vote Doesn't Count ... Not In The League... Unless It Is Somone's
Alias.. In Which Case, I Will Reinstate The Vote For COM

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Old 10-16-03, 07:25 AM   #9
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aight this aws not an excitin battle surprisingly.but.breakdown=
punches=com....harder...thats it
sustainment of punches=com
flow=tie
wordplay=neither...dint like both
metas=com
creativity=none
laughter factor=jus com
overall=com.jus felt him more
 
Old 10-16-03, 10:08 AM   #10
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yea i agree...COM did beat u B2K......although..

this battle was very boring..lol..(no offence)...

but i just felt COM came wit more wittier punches.....

and he threw some comedy in there as well.....

B2k i was expecting more from u......

since this was a probation match.......

but oh well guess not....but anywayz.......

my vote goes to COM for a overall better verse.......

yep..
pz....
 
Old 10-16-03, 10:12 AM   #11
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Umm...

Vote- both out of LLL......

COM takes it with some better punches, etc.
But was still bad
 
Old 10-16-03, 10:31 AM   #12
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Vote Com cause he was a little less wack

This Battle Sucked & Everyone Sees It...
Alot Of Played Concepts & Weak Attempts At Punches..
Com.. Its Looks Like You Won This One... But Next Week I Am
Gonna Put You Against Real Comp... & If You Drop Like YOu Did
This Week... You ARe Out For Good

Com Wins
BTK Loses & Out OF The League For Good

Battle Closed
 
 


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