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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03

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Chrit Said It Was Ok For Me To Edit My Verse..

Quick Key...Enough..

Split WarLords...the wack half is you, the other's the rest of the crew
Come on kid…I dropped a no show and is that the best u can do
All of ya lines are played…Shit I know your not an original KoNcEpT
But In Ya Lines There Must Be A –Logic-, nah, just disrespect
Look: just my first 4 lines killed you…so let me be quite frank
I’m gonna give you the benefit of my fatigue…and post 4 more lines- Blank
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Sorry bout the missing punches^^^^- but I agreed to do HIS best
I could have beat you with one line…it would just say: Fill in the rest __________
Looked at previous battles…damn kid, ur skills are below par
This is a text league…spit wit ^^^ <----these to raise ya bars!
the grave ain't far... ur too young to persue through a packed house
last time this fossil reached for the top, dude threw his back out

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<---- KoNcEpT


AHHHH....i forgot...about this

but he still cant edit his verse after i post mine so......

So you think you're N Lit End...but i got your groove spent...
u repped clastruphobic cuz your skillz have no room 4 improvment.
i've read a few of your verses..... and all i was bored
can't sell record so you threw it at a wal*mart to say it hit stores.
& the way you catch balls.... people call you a wide reciver
the only way this kid could run a track if his name was gale divas
you suck more than cheap hooker cuz ya punz are so un-witty
if ya town had a marathon is the only way MM couz run his city.
blah you are garbage and your career is just unsatisfactory...
watch as i eat this M&M like a fat kid a chocoloate factory...

lmao...this was whack....

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Wow... even with the redone verse... hum... I guess I'll say... booooooooo to you both... it was a gay battle... Mind you could have taken the win easily if the verse flowed... you tried multis and crap blah...


Logic... shit was still played like I said before... and yes I did come up with the wal mart line...

Due to the crap in this battle... I'll say... vote: Mind...

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MM Came OK... But It Was More Than Enough To Defeat Koncept. Koncept Had A few Decent Punches, But Had No Originality. MM Came Creative With A Few Personals.. And Decent Wordplay. It Seemed Koncept Was Just Rushing This Together.


Vote- MM For A Better Verse.

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you cant edit a verse after your opponent drops...
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^^^

MM had dropped a no show verse...
Then left for the day...
He then came back seeing koncept had jus met the deadline
So I gave him permission to write a real verse

um i dont mean to bitch but that's not fair...

he posted no show verse....
and since he posted a no-show
verse i just droped any blah with
out trying. Shit if he gets to post
a new verse than i should be able
to as well...

o well..... 0-2 MM.........

Vote MM

Its obvious he won... Logic admitted his verse was wack & it was..

Uppin Over Closed

Vote MM

Better verse in pretty well all aspects...

I'd break it down but its fucking 10 AM...