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Old 10-13-03, 03:53 PM   #1
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A little keystyle, nuttin special

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Know me as the broken bulb, the mighty light ripper
I set the mic on flames and hide the fire extinguisher
Chase you road runners, coyete rocket rider
Leave no trace, I set the stage with a two minute timer
I barbeque nemo with fire-breathing reload
The english rap job, kidnapping innocent microphones
My word's are ten frames of animation
Slice stomatchs with line mapping, the machete agent
Drop in maggots so they can test my human mazes
Using your intestines, I lasoo you with ancient voodoo
And doo-doo the move-moves, to chew you with chew chews
We can dual like street fighter two
Or we can western with ancient weapons
In the blazing desert with a referee in a set of 80 seconds
Your gun versus my stationary, I paint MP3's
And shoot literiture with my nuclear pictures at your spleen
I drown you with my fluids, swimming in my mucus
You can dive in my creative juices, and try surfing intelligence
Yea im asian, our food is hot-baking, you just mild
I cut off heads, and hold orgrans with my frisbee vinyl
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Old 10-13-03, 05:12 PM   #2
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tight drop bro, good wordplay and metas...for a keystyle it was a nice read, flow was tight, vocab was good, good drop man
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Old 10-13-03, 05:14 PM   #3
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that was pretty damn tight......u had a constant flow, wit some good vocab and wordplay, u chose a good topic to write about, and i thought it was hella ill......keep droppin holmes, that was tight.....

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Old 10-13-03, 05:19 PM   #4
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there was no topic?

i wonder if sometimes people actually read peices, and just paste there selection of five replies

thanx, uppin
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Old 10-13-03, 06:09 PM   #5
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^^i hope u wasnt talkin to me homie, i said ur topic was good, so i dunno who u talkin about holmes, but whatever.........

peace.......
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Old 10-14-03, 09:51 AM   #6
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aye!!! like it good metas, good word play good flow keep it up
wot wot!!!!!! PEACE............................................. ......
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Old 10-14-03, 10:15 AM   #7
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lol got some gay replies hehe

thanx
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Old 10-14-03, 12:32 PM   #8
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tight.... not original but creative.... an original topic would have been better
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