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Old 10-13-03, 04:26 PM   #1
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Dimense VS Solar Eclipse ( LLL Entry Match )

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Voters Are Required To Vote On Two Issue's:

1) Who Won The Battle
2) Do Either Of These Two Deserve A Spot In The League


Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03

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Old 10-13-03, 05:27 PM   #2
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How many BARS/LINES you wanna go ?
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Old 10-13-03, 06:53 PM   #3
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10 lines is all we need.............

until then..................

peace..........................
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Old 10-14-03, 03:23 PM   #4
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Wanna get this done early...
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Old 10-16-03, 09:27 PM   #5
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*sigh*


why even try.............................


Try to play this game, I shatter frames to shame Dimense’s dimensions…
Tame cruel intentions, I’ll light you up more than astral projections…
Sick like infection injections, mail me ur verse so I could get word of you…
Styles tried and true, (insert personal here) cuz I haven’t even heard of you…
Murder you, you spit shit but I guess that’s why you speak through the avatar…
Wackness must be a Chips Ahoy, cuz you have too many hands in the cookie jar…
Rend battle scars, tend to be like anxious window curtains cuz I always pre-veil…
Ill rip apart parts of your every being…just to show im attentive to detail…
Smack around Dimense, spittin solar flares and still couldn’t post intense…
Immense embarrasement, he grabbed a lawyer for this so he could ready a defense…
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Old 10-17-03, 12:06 AM   #6
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Eik I Pekla Eakiy

Solar You comin out Victorious'll Never be dawg
Like Fat Chicks on Drug scales.. Bitch your Heavily Off..
That lil Verse was cute u spit….but its about to be Done..
I’ll leave ya ‘Full of Clipse’..like the moon blockin the sun..
Its ur Midget Mom..who Eclised my Sight..that Shits Wrong…
this kids strong? Nah..u jus like a scab..Hard not to pick On.
Da Truth will set ya free..but this fact ll leave ya ego bruised..
Ya moms like aol..100 hours free plus fun and easy to use…
My Minds like Time itself..Ima kill you without any doubt
get comfy with the loss..cuz in LLL u dont Stand Out..now u Sit out.

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Old 10-17-03, 11:12 AM   #7
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im goin with Dimense on this battle.......

he had way better flow.....and a lot.......

of comedy in almost everyline.......plus he used better.......

usage of wordplay.....Solar ur lines are way to stretched.........

homie....and still kinda like a newbiash kinda style.........

but u still had an OK verse......But......

my vote goes to Dimense for a overall better verse......

yep..
pz....

oh yeah...and i think...Deminse should be in the league......

not solar eclipse.....

yep...
pz....

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Old 10-17-03, 11:27 AM   #8
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Ok...

I vote dimense In For LLL

For the battle he took it with nicer punches...
Some good wordplay in there as well

Vote- Dimense
 
Old 10-17-03, 11:42 AM   #9
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Vote Dimense for The Battle
& Vote Dimense In The League

felt D's verse more... he had better connecting punches.. a couple
of them were humorous... thought Solar's were a bit to forced &
played... Yup .. thats my 2 cents, cause thats all i can afford
 
Old 10-17-03, 11:44 AM   #10
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Vote dimense, ...better punches, funny aspects,...better flow,...

Better overall vote - Dimense...
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Old 10-18-03, 01:20 PM   #11
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Vote for D..In LL..and winning the match.. His lines were funny witty smooth and hard-hitting..the (Insert personal) line was nice but D ripped it....obivious..
 
Old 10-18-03, 04:27 PM   #12
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Dimense got this... HANDS DOWN..! In every aspect... Solar... should've tried dunny... That scab line was raw...


Is' highly impressed...


Vote imense...





I don't think a break down is necessary...
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Old 10-20-03, 08:34 AM   #13
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Well Dimense Wins & Is IN the LLL
Solar Loses & Is NOT IN the LLL

Battle Closed
 
 


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