This is the finished version of the song I previously posted titled "I..." I decided to make it one long verse and include no chorus. I know y'all are gonna think this sounds more like a poem than a song but it don't if you hear the audio, believe me it don't.
Anyways, here it is:

"Ultimate Regression"

I can't stand the world, I'm seen wearin' my head-set
Always listened to 2Pac, but ain't seen the "Better Days" yet
Another day another struggle, a teen so misunderstood
These emotions are within, I've yet to see the good
A tear runs down my cheek, as I lose more of my soul
For all this to be gone, would mean I've reached my goal
My shadow has abandoned me, it's found a better place
But I aint goin' nowhere, I'm in an enclosed space
I feel as though I'm worthless, is anybody there?
Someone who can help me, who can mend my dispair
I should exit this world, I have nothin' more to live for
Too many pressures arise, I can't continue on anymore
If only it would fade away, maybe then I would be successful
Life's a tug-of-war, and I aint got the strength to pull
I stand in front of the mirror, and am missin' a reflection
My whole bodie's out of order, I need a resurrection
I don't respect my self, thoughts of inflicting pain
This is a lost fight, I've gave up the use of my brain
These are the chapters of my life, I'm almost to the end
I wouldn't expect you to understand, since you've never been
Wishing for a change, but it's unlikely there'll be one
Too much weight on my shoulders, it feels like a ton
A race against time, and I know I'm the one who'll lose
I never wanted this life, I never got to chose
A fighter without his shield, I'm hit with every attack
Nothin' to protect me, I'm forced to retreat back
The stars outline my future, as I see them in the sky
I don't like what they show me, is it possible they lie?
I'm all by myself, as I travel this lonely path
You have all the equations, now figure up the math
God please take my hand, and lead me far from here
I'm afraid of what I might do, if given another year
A dark cloud over head, I'm in a state of depression
Bein' released from the womb, that's my ultimate regression

Nice
It was a lil long
work on your vocab and wordplay
if you'd be so kind to return the favor on my open mic

UPPIN ON THIS!!!!!!!!!!

Yea this was a pretty nice post. It was long but i peeped the 1st thread you posted up be4 you finished this and it was alot better. You had some nice word play, content was good and you vocab was straiight too....not a bad post. keep doin yo thang, 1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26