ok check in and say if u agree with the rules or not
10 lines
no b/s no d/r no hate, no unexplained votes, no crew
anything else say it when u check in, no due date cuz i wont know when u check in and good luck, oh yeah i will spit once u check in

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what up im checkin in yeah im fine wit those rules good luck to you too. u spittin first rite? yeah well make it happen

my mom told me to never hit a girl, but hears an exception
i mean butch haircuts arent in, no tits, u dont meet expections
dont even cross the inspection, go in for the physical and IT gets the ball check
really a guy undercover, lesbo or fagget, transvestite, this IT aint corect
shes not right in the head, i bet shes tryna spit out some lead
with some of those lyric bullets, i wouldnt even waste my time bangin IT in bed
ima leave this bitch where she cant even get a job at burger king
i madethe call out in bitch slapped, it jus so natural how i murder things
sorry that i had to destroy ur train of focus
but whacker then the movie hocus pocus

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u call yourself grotesque cause u got no skillz
u aint got no wins cause your rhymes just arent 'ill'
this aint gonna be one cause im gonna kill..
u cant spit no rhymes as nasty as mine
i got the whole crowd "ooh-in" wit one line
theres just no time for you to make your shit rhyme
your shits lamer than mine!
-did you purposely make it off beat..
or was it only like that cause u were smackin ya meat
while u were typin -BITCH-

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punches=gro
flow=gro
metas=gro
sustainment=gro
all=gro
this was a one sided battle
vote=grotesque

make sure ya hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86383

uppin .................................................. .......2 help me up this acid, hey no beef right?.................

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grot got this straightup...flow was a little off, but acid was just straight wack...keep elavting ya'll and hit this shit of mine up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86435

grotesque got this battle wit better punches and creativity. both of u need to keep writing so u will elevate. not a bad battle for newbies.

my vote=grotesque

holla

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both were really weak......grotesque wins cuz he came a little harder....flow was choppy by both and punches were wack and shit....but dude wins

vote-grotesque

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