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30 min blind post

450+ posts to vote

aight X now that I got one of my battles closed....

checkin in...will drop in like 20 or so...
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I Get Uncontrollable Urges...To Kill, Cuz When X Talks Shit Nobody's Listening Much
I'll 'Slap His Face' While He's In His Coffin And Add The 'Finishing Touch'!
Now He's Dead And Gone...Put Holes In This Herb's Chin..
Ya Style Needs Help, So I'll Toss Your 'Spirit' On Yahoo And Help You Do Some 'Soul Searching'!
As I'll Smack And Scratch This Kid's Going Off On Himself Like He Had A Rack
You Ain't A Pimp Fuck-In-Cadillacs, You 'Saw Yourself Ill' When You Survived Cataracts
Ya Flow'll Get Stopped Eventual, Cuz Drops That Wack Have Got To Be Sinful
I'll Mock Ya Mentals, Send You Back Down To Hell Where More Of The Cock Can Tempt You!!*
Rip You In Person And Text Too...But You Didn't Start Out On The 'Right Foot' Like 'Left Shoes..'
"After This W" "Before You" R(Are) Brutally Mutilated I'm Every X-Q's(excuse)!!!**



Explanations
*The Cock Can Tempt You=God COntempt You, Just A lil Wordplay
**Think About The Alphabet, X is After W, Q is before R....

iight i see u dropped i shall drop shortyl.........sry for the delay didnt see this.......TS cant vote.........1

this kid fails to Play by his cards, but itll be like Movie Premieres the way I make him start Seeing STars/
he wants to Step to the Legend, when his bars are Corrputed like taliban Mr.GoodBars/
Refrain to Act like you hotter, when I got more Trick Shots than Hookers Gettin Pimp SLapped by Harry Potter/
Ya spits fail to Hit harder, when you got more Bitch Hits than Female Boxers/
Wreck ya Dome, Ya Spits were always old, You couldnt Catch a Cold Spit even if you kissed Magic Johnsons Dome/
You wish ya Lyrics kept me on my toes, when you got more Bitch Moves than Prostitutes In Tai-Bo/
Im serious, I spit rapidly, this bitch is sweatin off calories/
Cuz iLL sweep this round like a janitor in a shooting gallery/
Wit 10 Lines That aint a verse, thats simply ya WiLL at Rappin.../
U still think u can BEAT ME? well check the SIG cuz im Still Laughin!!/

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......................DONT SLEEP....................1

cmon people we need votes please stop sleepin................

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breakdown=
punches=x
personals...was lakin=x
metas=x
creativity=both
flow=none......not good at all
laughter factor=rappad
multis=.............
vocab=x
vote=x
x jus had harder metas meetin punche
rappad had some nice one tho..................."Finishing Touch" was very nice


make sure ya hit this up or i'll post again.....lol......jus hit it up plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86489

X got this one...he stayed more consistent......

throughout his verse...and his....punches connected......

Rappad u came weak and most of ur shit was played.......

no offence....just stating the truth.....

so my vote goes to X for a overall better verse......

yep...
pz....

->Je@!<-

I really think Rappad got this one...

No offense and no beef, each is respected by me...

But I wasn't vibin with the "Harry Potter" thing or the played out "janitor/shooting gallery" lines...

Plus, alot of his shit was stretched...

I thought Rappad came more original, in a better format with better wordplay and more humorous and harder punches.

No hate/no beef.

This one is just gettig opinions from all over!

Peace

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im gonna get u killed / banned dont freepost like that

n poeple please explain ur votes better...............

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.............n the kid wit not enough posts ima get ur vote removed.....1

aight X came with it (halfassed even) more than rappad (who the fuck are u?)


Rappad: ya flow was wayyyyyy off...in fact there was no flow....ya had weak punches and your wordplay was too forced...and you had 0 personals to compensate for weal punches...


X: ya flow was a little off at times (second line especially)...ya punches were aight(better than rappads but thats not sayin much)...good wordplay and metas...one personal (sorta) at the end it was pretty good, made for a good finisher...


OVERALL THIS BATTLE SUCKED

vote=X ecution

^^there was no flow....what the fuck??????????? read the battle more carefully..
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and who the fuck am I??what kind of question is that?