RULES:
10 LINES MAX
ILL SPIT FIRST
NO D/R
NO CREW
NO HATE

Humpty dumpty's putin together lines- "tryin to sew", where ya really "buyin ya flows", cas ya swingin from ropes but still aint "fly'n ah show"/

Rippin ya smile so im "spittlin ya grins", only time hes comfortable is when "sittin on pins", an nailin his lines to my knee so they only "hittin my shins"/

Drop explosive votes cuz "nines the score", I shine on text like "vinyl chords", 16 men, but 17th's is closest you'll come to "final four"/

Geting rid of this shit like you "before you toss", beat ya before, whats "one more loss?", and like you with the St. Christopher, I "whore your cross"/

U Treatin This Battle Like 'Dodge Ball'- Juss-Ta'-Skip, U Thrust-For-Dick, Cuz Ya Spits Aint Makin Us Hold Our Mouths.. U 'JUSS-IN-SHIT!' /

UPPIN FOR DIS CATS VERSE
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checkin in yo..propz to ya verse..not bad..i'll spit in a few aight..
so hold up dog.........................
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peace

light up the mic...

I'm imperically advancing my lyrics, replacing simple syllabary with rounds of souped up machines//
I know you weren't lookin forward to another loss so I'm sorry to have scouped up ya dreams//
On second thought, no i'm not, cuz its your fault for thinkin you were sufficient//
Trickin yourself into thinkin you'd win only fooled your ambition so i'm endin this mission//
Don't go renderin fishin, cuz you ain't catchin heck son you aint even come close//
I'll give you props for steppin up but thats about as far as this goes//

blow it out...

Inflamation of the brain, the equations the same, even if you multiplied what you got you wouldn't add up to my game//
My Destination is fame, your inspirations my name, don't go blaming me just because your imagination is lame//
I feel a bit guilty because this is a battle between an elite and a newb//
Talon versus Talent, separating us both so in this you are the new-g//

im out...

close... very fuckin close...

structure- talon
flow- ace
punches- talon
wordplay- ace
vocab- ace
creativity- tie

vote- ace... due to a stronger vocab...

talon... you got talent... i see that shit... very nice drop... ace
barely took this... mad props to both

can yall hit up my battle wit an honest vote:

my bad... I forgot to add the link... here it is...
since I hit up yalls battle, please do the same... its gettin mad
slept on...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87267

I have to say both verses were good but in different ways.. Talon came with some creative lines, wordplay and punches, while ace came with that hard street flow.. and this vote goes to ace due to more elevated vocab, rhymes and overall flow
good battle though

structure=talon
punches=talon
flow=ace
creativity=talon
wordplay=ace
vocab=ace
overall=tie

just messin i think talon got this cuz he had more creative punches while ace was tryin to flow more---vote=talon

go vote on this battle please it's bein mad slept onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87275

i think ace got this..he just came with better flow and vocab..talon
came more creative..but ace came strong for a newb..so ima have
to go wit him on this one..mad propz to both
vote=ace

both came tight, props for that
but overall, i think ace got this, much better
vocab and flow, everything us was close tho
tight battle to both
vote=ace

WOW I TOOK IT EASY ON THIS CAT CUZ I THOUGHT HE WUZ GONNA BE A HERB ASS NEWBE BUT KID HAS GOT SUM SKILLS MUCH PROPS TO YA DAWG

thanx for the votes peeps..much appreciation..yea..i knew
this was gonna be a close one..^this kat is tight..watch out for him..
propz dog..nice battle..alright then..uppin