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[Wk3] Maddawg MKN vs LaRyan Shabaz
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Verses Due: Friday, October 31st 2003
Voting Ends: Monday, November 3rd 2003 Pick A Topic From This List Make it Dope.
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Destroyin beauty.......i'll go with this topic, checkin in, good luck man...............................peace,1
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I have no idea what I'm going to do. I don't like making choices, I don't like this direction. I am in...
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Unless I have an unforseen change of heart, I'm going to drop out of this altogether. I'm really not in the mood at this point, and I think the choose-your-own-adventure shit sort of put me over the edge. Apologies.
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Presently Light...Waits
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damn kid, i guess i will have to waste a good flow, f it, they will soon call me 7-0 in sacred scriptures battles, peace, 1
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wanna play doctor????????
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^wait...dont' waste that topic on a no show!...
it's mine! |
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lol, i already wrote half, i have to finish it or sumthin damn. if i dont show we both lose, sorry man, peace, 1
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Topic: Destroyin Beauty
Father (Kevin) Son (Mike) Hey dad…What’s tha significance of tha Stars and Stripes?/ It’s Freedom…son, and that’s what Guards your Lyfe/ It’s Security, even though it will be Dark Tanight, Stars will remain…to Spark tha Light/ Lyke uncle Marshall, always on call… to jumpStart your Bike/ Hahaha, come Park your Tyke, but Dad, I wasn’t Far from Right? Lyke a bird can rely on its wings before it Starts in Flight?/ Mike, your Partially Right, Dad, how does a flag Guard your Lyfe?/ This country protects us; men take chances in war… display Heart in Fight/ We’ve fought Hard for Rights, Dad, will there ever be a ReSolution?/ Couldn’t we cover tha world with Love, Instead of Pollution?/ There are too many enemies with cruel intentions and we cant Begin to Move Them/ They Spread Illusions, its almost impossible to End tha Movement/ Their language…”Sin” is Fluent, Clinch Tyme and Wait/ Only sanity pleads against tha Devine and Great, United States/ “Why tha Hate? Because “Evil” arrives in all Sizes and Shapes/ No worries son, these “criminals” will Find their Fate/ Mike drops a dish and it shatters…Kevin screams Time to Flank/ Get down, get down, there’s no Tyme to Waste/ Kevin dives on tha floor Mike Cries and Shakes than yells Dad, I’m Afraid/ (Kevin regains composure) My Mind is Blank…he closes his Eyes and Faints/ (Hour later) I’m sorry son, sometimes to obtain freedom there’s a large Price to Pay/ Now, I’m Understandin Less, Son…I suffer from a disorder…Post Traumatic Stress/ Both body and mind…Battles Test, it feels like I’m locked up inside, but Shackle Less/ Did this happen a long time ago, when you Packed and Left/ When mom was Sad… Depressed, son…I left for war, murdered under Massive Stress/ Before I go…I Have to Suggest, that War is only hatred (Destroyin Beauty) At its Best/ Its Tragic Mess, just protect your mom… and rememba I luv you in ways I Cant Express/ Dad, don’t Vanish…Lets/ (Kevin disappears, Mike wakes up) MOM, tell me more about Dad’s Death/ War is Surely Moving, think about all tha lives we are Poorly Losing/ No coinciding with Joy and Duty, when all that’s happening is Destroying Beauty/
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^^^thats was straight ill.... omg legends material
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it was good..legendary? i think you're just getting your freeposts in ashole ^
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nyce lookin mad man, dont hate feeble, stay real, peace, 1
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my bad, thanx for tha props Ill, i dont know why i typed mad man, wtf.......clerification done, uppin it, peace
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Straight Savage.
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Maddawg, That Was A Dope Drop, pretty deep, The only thing I need to ask you to do, is Work on your flow, I caught it, but it got choppy at some points. Good Fucking drop.
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Wow.. This Was Dope.. I Mean Really Dope.
The Flow Was Great, The Material Was Great. The Story Was A Great Outlook.. The Ending Was Beautiful. The Whole Color Scheme Was On Point, Yet Confusing At TImes.. Really Sux That It Was A No Show |
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Presently Light...Waits
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nyce lookin with tha feedback, mad appreciated, lyft it, stay real, peace, 1
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