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Old 10-27-03, 10:59 AM   #1
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I rhyme with perfect pronounciation to eschew obfuscation,
undying determination backed by the anger of a generation.
Trying to stop the mental decapation,
Thats ingulfing an entire nation.
People talk a big game then run from retaliation,
it drives me to smoke just to get the needed sedation.
My heart turns dark when faced with the starkness of reality,
Im pullin apart the farce that retards its functionality.
My brain becomes conveluded and i see things deluded,
i know you hear what im sayin cause this shit is deep rooted.
Im not the first to say it and i wont be the last,
but im gonna shake the world until i breathe ma last diying gasp.
The irrelavence of benevolence, they only look for the skelatons.
There will be no convalensence, we're in a state digresion,
causing negative progression and an increased agression.
An acrimonious populus creating obvious problems for us.
When bones turn to dust and swords turn to rust,
We got to look inside eachother and find the will to trust.
Now more and more we fear missles take fligt and soar,
After war after war there'll be nothin left to fight for.

============unfinished================

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I read the rules and it said somthing about putting where you posted comments on your first post.

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