this was written to the new ROCKNESS MONSTER track


What the diz god?
What you aint think this would happen???
Shit it was only a matter of time..
this is what happens when you got a drunk mother fucker freestylen
to a club beat battling some fake ass bling blingleaven they hands green
gap toothed preety puffy want to be bad boy.

NONCENTZ….made it to heaven? GOOD GOD-
Only after he got expelled from hell and satan got robbed.
i fear (no gun)-respect (none)-my insult to injury has just begun.
you m.c.’s is vampires i spit fire and your scared to be SONNED.
(sun).
But I make a freestyle battle seam like world war 1.
Talk a lot of metaphors but each one means danger-
tie you down and celebrate your barmitsfa in a gas chamber.
Im that deranged plus my brains that strange-
JERRY LEWIS got telethons phone lines donaten in my name.
Use words to get on peoples nerves turnen haters to vapors-
Give me a metaphor All I need to smoke these herbs is loose papers.
And fuck a gun I don’t need the heat to blast ya-
Burn one with a flow iller than cancer-
And let the second hand smoke kill faster.
(what the fuck)
I was born good looking-but my eyes looked stupid
My eyes straight now but the way I view the world’s crooked
.im a say it now so it don’t get mistooken-
my bars do more battery then police brutality in central booken.

From Miami to Brooklyn Im gully….
Turtle neck sweater ,jean shorts and rugbies-
4 yr old timbs gully……
no socks and usen pajama shirts for skullies.

You can go ahead and try to knock it-
But you the type that moved out and has to pay rent to rep your projects.
You one of them pretty boys that claim ill and talk shit-
Pretty boys with waves that leave you sea sick.
That aint me im totally twisted-
Spending grocery bills on getting blitzed kid.
With so many dope lines spit, you wonder how much crack I did.

(50 centz snippet) YOU CAN FIND ME IN THE CLUB…..

drunk off drugs-asking girls for hugs sticking my finger in they pussy nubs-
that’s a true thug-you the type that worry aboute your image
talk like a stud smoke EXTACY and ask your boys for some love.
I don’t worry if yall nigguz like me-or if you spite me-
Cause I aint trying to fuck you but am fucking your girl likely!
That’s me the type to fallow you to an econo lodge-
CAR JACK YOU in the INTREPID screamin get the fuck out of DODGE

is it that bad?

this was dope like a scope...ya flow, vocab, etc... was good as usual...just work on ya multi'z...but this would make a dope audio...especially with the lil' 50 snippit and then it changin' back to the Rock beat...I ain't heard that new Rockness Monster track...I ain't heard nuttin' from that mufucka since Heltah Skeltah'z last cd...

now...damn it...drop some feedback on "The World From My Doorstep"...

go there http://www.rockness.net/sounds.php there is new material you can listen too if you want he is solo now and even in one dissess duck down records

yeah this shit was tight. i like the way you write you get yer expression out good through the flow. i can see this bein spit as fire to a tight beat, i don't know the beat you were talkin about but i liked this flow to any hard ass beat. Good word structure 2. Tight shit...1

THNX POP IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED

ay, yo, the whole thing was hot, i liked it. especially the:

CAR JACK YOU in the INTREPID screamin get the fuck out of DODGE

pretty good

THANK YOU

good piece, nice flow, good vocab, an shit man shudnt be slept on...it was unique to some of your lines...glad ta be part of the omens now..peace

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Secluded
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THANKS RULE AND WELCOME

that was some sick shit homie--i liked the "i was born good lookin" line.

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