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Old 11-02-03, 09:55 PM   #1
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Runnin (Remix)...

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Love the song...the beat is the shit...its the beat from the 2pac and Biggie track Eminem made....i mixed in the chorus and shit...it tells a story about what happened and peace we should be takin ...has a meaning..check it out and drop links...thanx...PEACE

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Old 11-02-03, 10:07 PM   #2
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^you post to much........ go give someone some (feedback... (peace)
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Old 11-03-03, 12:44 AM   #3
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ight i posted to ALOT...NOW UP MY SHIT
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Old 11-03-03, 02:06 AM   #4
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i dropped feed on this at another site.. its a cool track with just a couple little flaws man.. im upping it for you cuz you have replied to a lot of threads that i can see
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Old 11-03-03, 04:08 PM   #5
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igh tthanx...UPPIN
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Old 11-04-03, 04:43 PM   #6
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jesus christ this is a nice track...UPPIN
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Old 11-04-03, 05:31 PM   #8
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Yahh, the accent is a lil' weird to me the way you accent the end of yer words but who cares that's just preference. You came nice on this track and i like were yer goin wit yer lyrics and flow. Good shit not just spittin a bunch of stuff that rhymes. You got good rhyme content.
Overall this drop was cool..................

feedback on one of my cuts, got 2 or 3 on the 1st page. 1
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Old 11-05-03, 12:52 AM   #9
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*please kill this beat if u are using it*

clicks....

yeah...the enunciation is your main problem

you know how to flow...delivery is good...but the way u say your words...OVER enunciate them

"Make Room for me" instead of "make room fa' me"

stuff like that...

but good shit nonetheless

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Old 11-05-03, 06:10 AM   #10
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your delivery is coo.... your voice = classic whiteboy voice.... lyrics coo....... THIS AINT GRAMMER SCHOOL. this nigga been puttin his private school education in his raps..... from now on dont exagerate your words......... short and sweet... like alka said
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Old 11-05-03, 11:26 AM   #11
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LOLLLLLLLLLL....yall some igorant mothafuckas (<--hows that)...privatew school...LOLLLL... ight thanx for the feed apprciate it..
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