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Old 11-03-03, 02:09 AM   #1
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Questions...

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mixture of comedy and deep ish.. my half of a collab with e-quell for the ima presents compilation.. drop your thoughts.. the feed will be returned

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/m...ogicalmusic.htm

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Old 11-03-03, 05:42 AM   #2
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Good lookin out on my feedback.

I like this shit. listenin.............yeah you goin over a lotta thoughts that I and all people have. Tight when mc's raise questions, i do that a lot in my song format shit...."we all know the truth hurts well then why do you feel better after you go to church"//-IllLiterature (tight shit, i feel you)

Yo this is the type a song i wouldn't necessarily bump in the whip but listenin to at the crib on lounge mode with a thought process ya know...I liked it, beat was cool, delivery was different, oriogional, confident 2. Overall a nice lil' drop. Wassup with lettin the beat ride is that for the other compilation cats spots?

Tight Drop.

If you could or if you haven't yet, check my latest cut in the song forum:
"A Thievez Execution"

I'll be checkin for more of your shit, let me know and i'll feedback. 1
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Old 11-03-03, 07:30 AM   #3
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Sup IllLit..
<<< Orphic from RF.
Anywayz..
This was a tight drop. I was feelin' it.
The beat was nice, you flowed to it well. It fit the type of song this is. Flow is on point. Lyrics were pretty nice. But like Bliss said, what's up with lettin' the beat ride like that?
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Old 11-03-03, 02:51 PM   #4
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yeah equells verse will fill the rest of that when its done... thats why it runs on.. i was too lazy to chop it off before i posted...thanks for the feedback and whats up orph.. good to see you here
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Old 11-03-03, 07:18 PM   #5
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its aight but i wasnt feelin tha cats flow tooo much

sounded like he was just talkin n not rappin

na mean??

quality was coo

beat was eh
sounded like the beat was missin something
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Old 11-04-03, 01:31 AM   #6
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nice beat... you make it or is it an instrumental from a song...i can relate to the concept....flow was on point......makes you think, has a chillin vibe to it, i think i might use this idea, keep droppin the tightness... 1
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Old 11-04-03, 11:27 AM   #7
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thanks for rteurnining the favr.. and the beat was given to me by a producer
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Old 11-05-03, 07:22 PM   #9
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the beat's aight still yo, I'm likin' it to a point.
lyrics and flow are tyte, some funny lines in there.
touchin on some subjects a lot of people don't really wanna go on but itz all good. track's tyte
keep spittin'
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Old 11-05-03, 08:47 PM   #10
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i got 99 probelms but a bitch aint one!! lol
Hey thanks for peepin my shit... i appreciate that..

flow is reallll nice... its pretty funny.. i liked the hockey line... I liked the lyrics they was nice.. beat is nice too... i'm just riding that shit out lol.. its nice.. good drop
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Old 11-06-03, 01:22 PM   #11
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thanks for dropping your thoughts homies.. much appreciated
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Old 11-07-03, 10:59 AM   #12
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yeah you have a nice concept here... being profound is the key to a good poet... and i love poetry so i love this ... keep doing you

i have a question
why is LIVED DEVIL backwards?
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