Unclothed and decontaminated, the shadows of my chest
Bearing all to those who dare to encounter me undressed
Feeble minded are those who when naked are pesimists
Nothing could be more beautiful, GOd's work at it's best

I love nothing more than the variations of my skin
Knowing that in this moment I'm showing outside from within
Seamless, flawless, has no beginning shows no end
Taking in all and nothing, you cannot hide this, nor pretend


Something I wrote this past weekend... an try as I might I can't get much further than this. I lack the arrogence to constantly write about my body and likeing it... But hey, maybe some one'll get a kick outta it

This is cool. Gave me an image in my mind that is oh so sweet. Not in a perverted way but that of looking at an angel unclothed and having the "balls" to look and comment on such a beautiful site. Whats there is there and it's relatity. Thanks for the read. It let my magination fire up and get a sense of it all. Spect JT

great drop. yea I got a kick out of it. it was worth the read and like jt said it lets the imagination fire up. it gave me images in my mind of the most beautiful thing on earth. a woman's body. not to sound prevented or anything but it is the most beautiful thing to look at and touch the silky smooth texture of it. once again great drop. keep it up.

MM

wow, wat a drop, tha poetic ability u have to talk about ur own physical beuty as well as a female's physical beuty as in tha world itself is a very fine n touching way to express beauty within it's self, wether or not inside and outside u feel a beauty upon urself u still know that it is beauty none tha less, nic...

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Thank you, I think some of this comes from randomness, an gettin out of the shower... I love my skin after that. But another peice of it comes from that whole "I'm fat" thing.... I dunno jus liked what I saw that day an decided to share, nice to see people liked it, peace

Reflection, is what I get out of this drop. I can see through your eye's what you appreciate about yourself. From your body to the contours of your skin. It's almost as you are just realizing how lovely your flesh really is. Like an awakening, from a misconception you had or have been lead to believe about your anatomic vehicle. One of the most attractive things a woman can do, is be confident in her own skin. I find that the measure of true beauty. It is reflected into everything the woman does and how she carries herself. It is an amazing and spell binding charectersitc that all woman should embrace. Find confidence in what you see as attractive in your own 'playground of flesh' and those around you will be drawn into your confidence. Confidence is much more attractive than arrogance. Good job on this, you really have talent sweetie!

Much love
Bouncedog...

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I think this poem needs to be plastered around and shown to every woman in the world. It just sort of proves how beautiful a woman is, now matter what she thinks of herself. "GOd's work at it's best"... you said it well. This piece is beyond words from me. Short, but it still got to the point.

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Lol you're more than welcome to do that Angel... hell some one might gimmie some money for it or something *crosses fingers* I'm dead broke right now! Thank you all for your comments.. peace

its poems like this that have me painting a picture in my head while iam reading. its short but u can visualize so much. great drop, keep doing ya thang......

nice drop........

more power to u fa bein naked an likin it.....im pretty sha all the guys agree wit u i liked the flow an use of vocab but bein person i am i liked the topic the most...

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Every lil boi is born shi......their ignorance makes them bold......

simply put"...wise words whisperd to deaf ears as no one hears the blurred proverbs that're always spoken clear so i fuckin swear that my where wont be here as time tolls..." second verse of 'Elevate' written by -shi-

this a good poem, powerful, u shood frame this or somethin, haha, good work, keep it up

lol I'm trippin on how majority of these replies have been from guys... tha's funny. Again thank you all for appreciating something that I love... peace

I don't have much to say. Everyone else pretty much said everything. But I got two things I'd like to bring up.

1-Guys really don't like hearing the word "Naked" followed by the words "Short and Sweet". We really don't.

2-I need a fucking kleenex or a paper towel or something to clean up the mess.

~Irenic~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.