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"Gimme My Box Back Bitch!" Eye WitNesS 5 24 11-07-03 02:23 PM
by Funn DementaLL

suicide (what would u do?) .:alliK:. 11 56 11-07-03 02:21 PM
by Funn DementaLL

[ - Chameleon - ] Edicius 8 29 11-07-03 02:17 PM
by Funn DementaLL
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Funn:

Born into poverty, I'm a victim upon many/
A sinner is a 'peice' of mind which makes an 'automatic' a 'semi'/
hangin' wit the same dudes that stain cocain on twenties/
loving the smell of crack, stash the notes an pay in pennies/
an, NUMBERS ain't DONE ME, see AGE-DON'T-MEAN-SHIT/
It's bout how many rush you dummies, an breakin' ya pieces/

Star:

if ya learn any lessons that life teaches is that the nine reaches
the nine ceases ya life and that of each one of ya nine nieces
so i say fuck whats giving bitch, i'm here to take whats mine
and throw more steal in ya neck than muthafuckin Frankenstein
death is eternal, my minds trapped in a one story burning inferno
Star and Funn commander and chief to all the soldiers and colonels

Funn:

No matter what they say, there's no coming back from the grave/
misleadin' thoughts that stay in my mind, an crush my brain/
which shuts down any COGITATION, IDEA, HEED or INTENSION I have/
all I do is see it, write it and then record it in my lab/
I Rap, coz I wanna make a CHANGE, like a rehab/
by exposing the wisdom that lays under my skull cap/
my arteries be punchered, so I-SPIT-FROM-THE-HEART/
breathin' easy, gettin SET, before I TAKE MY MARKS/
Coz If it's a HUMAN RACE, then I jus won it/
academically a gimmick, you know nothin' of it/

Star:

fuck the human race, Star and Funn control all earths species
the way i shit on these kids got ya thinkin my names birth feces
my thought process is complex, shit i can levitate objects
hurl em across the room to stop ya progress, Star the monster of loch ness
Star and Funn a combo of deadly proportions, deadly with the force when
i flow heavy and bend you all outta shape like i spit contortions
i cook up emcees, and serve up amazement, disturbed word placement
the kid bananas cause the flow ape shit, we the best out face it
why yall dudes not goin nowhere like birds flyin in the basement
Star and Funn define greatness, were god like the way we float in the air weightless

uppin dis...

"How often do I have to un-load this shit to get a rating//
Bitches, give no feedback too busy masturbating//"- werd

uppin dis

uppin

Yo, i liked the whole colab, it was pretty dope. Like the E.G for the feedback, haha! Peace homies

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

uppin for some feedback on this mofo...

uppin yet again for some feedback on this....

i liked your collab..you two go well together..peace out

anyone else wanna leave some feedback...

liked the multis and metaphors.Good vocab as well,Ya'll did a good collab. Stay ^
-Avi

uppin dis, coz we ain't get the attention I feel we deserved!!!

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desperate to up this .lol

anyway i dont blame u with those wack ass replies^

pretty good collab though
the flow was good from both sides..although the rhymes were quite simple at times
some word play in there from both which was good..the first bit about guns was pretty wack though
seriouslyy gun talk on the net is just stupid even if it is metaphorical
appart from that it was a good read
quite simple but collabed well

'death is eternal, my minds trapped in a one story burning inferno
Star and Funn commander and chief to all the soldiers and colonels
^thought that was one of your best lines Mon

'my arteries be punchered, so I-SPIT-FROM-THE-HEART/
breathin' easy, gettin SET, before I TAKE MY MARKS
^funn's best imo

props