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11-09-03, 12:25 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Emergency. . . *Best Piece I've Penned*
IP: 1906 B4FD
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Aisle 5- Don't Push Me Deva- The Way It Should Be Masta C Feat. Gene Pool- Lies ** I know it's a long read, but trust me, it's worth it. A heart monitor is heard. . . regular shit. . . no sign of problems. . . then suddenly. . . The Flatline is heard. . . Help. . . Unity. . . We need to overcome this shit. . . This is a fucking Emergency. . . We are doubted, They never gave and will never give a shit about it Doubt our talent, so the hate just isn't balanced That's childish, how you gonna hate what you ain't heard? No I dont't go to church, N those words just making it worse Ya'll said we wouldn't make it, debated it, opinions never changed If ya'll hate us so much, then why ya'll always speakin our names? Beef with the game, All I hear is bitchin about Explicit Content That's non sense, This shit is constant, N becoming a threat It ain't like I'm gunnin with techs, Fuck, I don't even own a gun I'm jus tryna get reality through the heads of ya sons And girls, who are far too much exposed to the fake in this world It's not case-closed, why you tryna bury our music? I know, 'cause the last time I checked MC's were the biggest influence But this shit gotta stop, you fucks gotta leave us alone 'Cause I don't wanna be writin a track N hear I gotta pack N go home [Chorus] So This Is My Plea, To All MC's in this industry They Killin Us See?, This Is A Real Fuckin Emergency Urgency, Urging, All Ya'll Aritists To Take A Stand Here's A Hand, Stand Up, Fight With Me Man Look, Right where I stand, I see insurmountable odds Squad cars, Rappers shot, Soon we outta of job Through My eyes in the corner, it's Parents with Picket Signs Dickless mimes, Complainin about all the bad words in our rhymes Well don't listen, for you, this was not intended I for one am not bendin to satisfy this fuckin system You got alternatives: Country, Pop, N R@B We gotta clear these hurdes but safety still far from reach Homeland security ain't securing me I'm worried see, and wonder why we don't have Rap-Front security You're Dope Man, my boys is reassuring me But the jury for rap music never heard it, I'll never see my purgery This is a real fuckin Emergency, we can't take they words for granted We were handed a gift, they shit on us, I can't stand it So let's fight, unite N battle with two feet planted [Chorus] This is my 911 call for help, an MC answer please 'Cause chances these dudes won't leave us cancer-free Has Skyrocketed, they pick-pocketing us for dignity Are ya Kiddin Me? Why the fuck are we are the enemy? 'Cause we use our First Amendment right of free speech? This ain't free teach, we go to great lengths to get our message out You curse my penship, God's ya witness? That's good, but notice we never complain when ya put ya blessings out That's real shit, I see that Parental Advisory is nothing Cause Parents are blarin' it, our music they choose it N curse us for cussing Ain't that somethin? I'm guessin that's why sales is high on SoundScan They sayin' "Look What Found" listen then "Damn" We may say grab a knife N fight, but that's not as bad as it sounds man Take into consideration the number of kids picked on in this Nation Face it, don't fake it, It's too fuckin basic Cause basically we tellin um, to fight is right to rid of the hatred We don't gotta, we gonna clear this hurdle N make it Before you get judgmental and hate this Look to the internal of these fucking statements [Chorus] Listen to what i'm sayin, we are in major fucking danger of losing the shit we love to do, we gotta come together. . . The Flatline turns into a heartbeat. . . Unity. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Ya'll know what it's about. Feedback Appreciated. -Formula.
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11-09-03, 07:54 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Nice peice..nice concept ya stay on topic for the whole peice...flows on point n all tht shit..feelin most of it..get this shit to audio..its nice
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11-09-03, 08:44 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 1FB4 0B7B
yeah.. flow was on point, the lyrics is dope, you got a nice multi structure.. and it sound like one of nas's joints.
keep 'em commin plya holla one. |
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11-09-03, 03:55 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 6E65 1B29
Hmm This Was Decent.. The Flow Was Real Nice In The Beggining. But It Kinda Lost Me After That. Topic Was Very Nice, And You Stayed With It Very Very Well. Keep Droppin Man And Stay Up.
Wun.
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11-09-03, 08:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: E38C 4580
Thanks for the feed, it's appreciated.
*Plays B2K's Bump Bump Bump* Wrd. |
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11-09-03, 10:00 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: A1D0 A113
yo nyce Peice dawg keep that commin aiight Peace (v)
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11-10-03, 05:39 PM | #7 | ||||||
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*Bump Bump Bump is still playing*
Lemme See This Dope Ass Track Go Bump Bump Bump. . . That Is All I Wanna See, Repliers Show Me. . . Wrd. -Formula. |
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11-10-03, 06:07 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
bumpbumpbump and b2k are stupid they should be called b2gay
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11-10-03, 06:27 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 2A26 A9C2
fuckin' dope man, first verse was the best, keep on postin', it was so good, you could've made it longer
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