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Old 11-11-03, 08:20 AM   #1
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[Middle Weight Match] 13th Disciple VS Chrit

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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-12-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-14-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 11-16-03

I Dont Care If You Battled Before... You Are Battling Again

Good Luck & Give A Fuck....
 
Old 11-11-03, 11:39 AM   #2
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We saw this coming...

In

10?
 
Old 11-11-03, 02:44 PM   #3
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no doubt...


we'll go 10..



ain't this a bitch
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Old 11-11-03, 02:57 PM   #4
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Aight...
Keying this...
.....now


Man.. 13ths wack... postin first so he can "Clap Back"
About to abuse your dome and leave you fitted with my knee cap...
You've fell off...
...man ya shook like the Pope and Ali holding hands
Merked you with recycled text... destroying ya audio plans...
A champ? Maybe by alias votes you could have me...
We all know ya intentions... Rocking that Brooklyn avvy...
Abusing basketball coaches the only time 13th'll get Lute...
And after this battle ya ass will be like ya car.... with a boot
Pedophile that likes men... Wow, 13th has an impressive rep...
At the peak of his career til I threw him to his death...

Meh..
A key...
Seriously not feeling this matchup
 
Old 11-11-03, 03:14 PM   #5
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this is kinda fucked up i gotta battle u...when u my dawg...........
so here....quick key.....



been thru it all....started together and now run in the same crew
but Ryan weighs 100lbs..so we all know this belt doesnt fit you..
give it up dude...if beatin u is wrong...fuck it i don't wanna be right
& ur audio is a reason why its hard to get respect when ur white..
somewhere u lost sight...like car jackings dunny ur losin ur Focus..
Chrit was a magician in jail.....and showed kids where the Poke-is
ur my dawg kid...but i gotta leave u hanged like Judas in paintings
be urself & stop tryin to be Black Labeled like full flavored Salems
...it didn't add up...us battlin was a problem..but now its solved...
u'd think after ur loss last week..ur loss woulda taught u to Evolve


blah...keyed shit...didn't mean anything to me cuz Chrits is
truthfully my boy.....so whatever happens happens....
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Old 11-11-03, 05:26 PM   #6
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Not A Bad Battle.. Not Lived Up To Potential
I Seen Both Of You Come Before.. Most Likely
Because Of The Fact That You Cool Wit Eachother.

But To Get to The Point.. 13th Took This Clean.
Some Original Punches By chrit, But Nuthing That
Made Me Be Like "Damn That Was Tight". 13th Just
Came All Out Better.

Vote - 13th
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:31 PM   #7
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Meh...

In my 7 weeks in league you've always voted against me...
Dont you get tired of it?
 
Old 11-11-03, 10:35 PM   #8
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Hmm... Close Battle... Both Clean Verses...

Critique

The If Beat You Is Wrong I Dont Wanna Be Right Punch Is Played Out Like A Bitch...

Chrit... You Had 1 Too Many Fillers...

Good Points

13th... That Line About Him Being White On The Mic Made Me Laugh Out Loud... Nice Punch

Chrit... Your Brooklyn Avy Punch Was Priceless... Made Me Laugh My Ass Off

Overall

13th... Huge Fan Of Yours... Love Your Shit

Chrit... Same To You... I Read Your Verses When Tryin To Get In The Mood For Merking

13th Had The Flow And Complexity, But Chrit Had The Structure And Harder Hitting Punches Both Had Nice Wordplay...

But Because Of The Punches I Gotta Go With Chrit... Much Love To Both You Though

Vote- Chrit

Props 13th... No Hate Homie
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Old 11-12-03, 09:11 AM   #9
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I Obviously Did Not Read The Rules...
Cause If I Did I Would Have Known That Only People In The LLL
Are Allowed TO Vote....
Excuse My Ignorance While I Go Kill Myself....
 
Old 11-12-03, 06:52 PM   #10
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Man.. 13ths wack... postin first so he can "Clap Back"
About to abuse your dome and leave you fitted with my knee cap...
OK LINE OK WORDPLAY

You've fell off...
...man ya shook like the Pope and Ali holding hands
Merked you with recycled text... destroying ya audio plans...
NICE FIRST LINE BUT SECOND WAS HMMM

A champ? Maybe by alias votes you could have me...
We all know ya intentions... Rocking that Brooklyn avvy...
AVERAGE BAR

Abusing basketball coaches the only time 13th'll get Lute...
And after this battle ya ass will be like ya car.... with a boot
^ VERY NICE PUNCH

Pedophile that likes men... Wow, 13th has an impressive rep...
At the peak of his career til I threw him to his death...
AVERAGE TO NICE PUNCH...






been thru it all....started together and now run in the same crew
but Ryan weighs 100lbs..so we all know this belt doesnt fit you..
NICE OPENER

give it up dude...if beatin u is wrong...fuck it i don't wanna be right
& ur audio is a reason why its hard to get respect when ur white..
EVEN THOUGH I'M WHITE THIS LINE FLOWED WELL AND WOULD HAVE PISSED ME OFF IF IT WAS AGAINST ME

somewhere u lost sight...like car jackings dunny ur losin ur Focus..
Chrit was a magician in jail.....and showed kids where the Poke-iS
NICE WORDPLAY MADE ME SMILE

ur my dawg kid...but i gotta leave u hanged like Judas in paintings
be urself & stop tryin to be Black Labeled like full flavored Salems
BLAH..

...it didn't add up...us battlin was a problem..but now its solved...
u'd think after ur loss last week..ur loss woulda taught u to Evolve
OK FINISHER......

chrit started weaker than normal but pulled it back towards the end whereas 13th started strong and fell off towards the end.... i think chrit JUST edged it with slightly with wittier punches, not a good battle considering who was actually battling but they
have allready explained why i suppose, so vote CHRIT
 
Old 11-12-03, 06:55 PM   #11
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2-1
 
Old 11-12-03, 07:04 PM   #12
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by COM
[B]Man.. 13ths wack... postin first so he can "Clap Back"
About to abuse your dome and leave you fitted with my knee cap...
Pretty Good Bar

You've fell off...
...man ya shook like the Pope and Ali holding hands
Merked you with recycled text... destroying ya audio plans...
Blah.. Really.

A champ? Maybe by alias votes you could have me...
We all know ya intentions... Rocking that Brooklyn avvy...
Dope Bar.. Seriously

Abusing basketball coaches the only time 13th'll get Lute...
And after this battle ya ass will be like ya car.... with a boot
Pretty Funny

Pedophile that likes men... Wow, 13th has an impressive rep...
At the peak of his career til I threw him to his death...
Not Feelin This One






been thru it all....started together and now run in the same crew
but Ryan weighs 100lbs..so we all know this belt doesnt fit you..
He Weighs More Than 100 Pounds To Me.. And It Was A Played Concept

give it up dude...if beatin u is wrong...fuck it i don't wanna be right
& ur audio is a reason why its hard to get respect when ur white..
Nice Bar.. Gettin Personal

somewhere u lost sight...like car jackings dunny ur losin ur Focus..
Chrit was a magician in jail.....and showed kids where the Poke-iS
Dopest Bar For Both Sides

ur my dawg kid...but i gotta leave u hanged like Judas in paintings
be urself & stop tryin to be Black Labeled like full flavored Salems
Nice Again

...it didn't add up...us battlin was a problem..but now its solved...
u'd think after ur loss last week..ur loss woulda taught u to Evolve.....
Nice.. Damn Nice.


Man This Was A Tough One To Vote On.. Both Came Well.. And Each Had A Few Lines That Stood Out. But I Think 13th Edged This One Out By A Hair.. Personals Hit Harder.. Wordplay Was Dope.. Good Battle But 13th Gets My Vote.
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Old 11-12-03, 10:33 PM   #13
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Still up 2-1

Aus was banned...

Faggot anyhow
 
Old 11-13-03, 09:22 AM   #14
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Vote 13th Disciple

I went back and forth for a few minutes with who to vote for.....i had to read the verse a couple times.....Chrit you came lazy this week....had many played concepts but i think this was your best

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Originally posted by Chrit
A champ? Maybe by alias votes you could have me...
We all know ya intentions... Rocking that Brooklyn avvy...


13th i enjoyed your verse....you had some suspect concepts but overall you came nice with some nice personals and hard hitting personals, this was your best

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Originally posted by 13th Disciple
somewhere u lost sight...like car jackings dunny ur losin ur Focus..
Chrit was a magician in jail.....and showed kids where the Poke-is

...it didn't add up...us battlin was a problem..but now its solved...
u'd think after ur loss last week..ur loss woulda taught u to Evolve


Overall you could tell both wasnt feelin this battle, and it affected the match....it was ok but could have been better....

That is all
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Old 11-13-03, 11:31 AM   #15
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Meh...
2-2
 
 


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