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Old 11-13-03, 01:35 PM   #1
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Just 17 yars old

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Yo, i know this isn't what i usually post, but it was just off the head n writen in 5 mins Peace)


Just 17 years old, at college, doing a course to gain knowledge//
Of course it’s hard, but I discard to give in n not get acknowledged//
Mortgages n marriage may lay ahead of me//
But for the time being, I’m seeing n taking what’s in front of me//
A life of a boy with prospects n a future//
Sitting at his desk writing a spit on his computer//
Posting to see n check what the response is from this culture//
I told ya, I’m 17 years old n no older//
This year, will be another chapter in my folder//
Colder, the days draw darker//
The street lamps light up, like a sparkler//
My life, is still young, but with a heart of a soldier//

Just seventeen years old, no older//
Just seventeen years old, with a heart of a soldier//
Just seventeen years old, I told ya//
Just seventeen years old, no older//

Just 17 years old, earning a wage//
With a short temper n a anger that goes off into a rage//
Like an animal locked in a cage//
He’s agitated n mixed up, cos of his age//
“De-ranged” never, it’s only his hormones he inherited from his mother//
He’ll out-grow it when he’s older, becoming a man with priority of a soldier//
Folders n chapters of his life, come into play//
He’s just seventeen years old, with no plans to give way to what life demands//
When the day comes he’ll descend n apprehend into becoming a man//

Just seventeen years old, no older//
Just seventeen years old, with a heart of a soldier//
Just seventeen years old, I told ya//
Just seventeen years old, no older//

(The whole concept is how I feel, how I am, give feedback if you want…)
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Old 11-13-03, 05:08 PM   #2
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Nice Piece
Need's Elavation but 5 MIN I can't blame you!!
Other than that needs A little elevation//
Good Shit
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Old 11-13-03, 05:55 PM   #3
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That was a nice concept, you got you elevate the mind, kinda when you gotta kick back to nas and mobb deep, better believe, anyways, keep it up...!
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Old 11-13-03, 06:28 PM   #4
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this woulda been damn sweet if you put more time in it
hook was real nice
should post a better version up
it'd be dope as hell
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