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Just 17 yars old
IP: 0BA5 FAF6
Yo, i know this isn't what i usually post, but it was just off the head n writen in 5 mins Peace)
Just 17 years old, at college, doing a course to gain knowledge// Of course it’s hard, but I discard to give in n not get acknowledged// Mortgages n marriage may lay ahead of me// But for the time being, I’m seeing n taking what’s in front of me// A life of a boy with prospects n a future// Sitting at his desk writing a spit on his computer// Posting to see n check what the response is from this culture// I told ya, I’m 17 years old n no older// This year, will be another chapter in my folder// Colder, the days draw darker// The street lamps light up, like a sparkler// My life, is still young, but with a heart of a soldier// Just seventeen years old, no older// Just seventeen years old, with a heart of a soldier// Just seventeen years old, I told ya// Just seventeen years old, no older// Just 17 years old, earning a wage// With a short temper n a anger that goes off into a rage// Like an animal locked in a cage// He’s agitated n mixed up, cos of his age// “De-ranged” never, it’s only his hormones he inherited from his mother// He’ll out-grow it when he’s older, becoming a man with priority of a soldier// Folders n chapters of his life, come into play// He’s just seventeen years old, with no plans to give way to what life demands// When the day comes he’ll descend n apprehend into becoming a man// Just seventeen years old, no older// Just seventeen years old, with a heart of a soldier// Just seventeen years old, I told ya// Just seventeen years old, no older// (The whole concept is how I feel, how I am, give feedback if you want…)
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IP: 5130 1CF2
Nice Piece
Need's Elavation but 5 MIN I can't blame you!! Other than that needs A little elevation// Good Shit |
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IP: 7B47 7A87
That was a nice concept, you got you elevate the mind, kinda when you gotta kick back to nas and mobb deep, better believe, anyways, keep it up...!
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IP: 05E9 BFA3
this woulda been damn sweet if you put more time in it
hook was real nice should post a better version up it'd be dope as hell |
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