sinfic - ideas
sinfic - to take life
allik - suicide

i know the flow is a bit off, but thats cos its meant for audio, then its ok, so.......


When a dawg asks if ya fucked his bitch….DENIAL
When ya busted for smokin the weed….DENIAL
When ya chill’n and sick of giving….DENIAL
So what I use, when being accused?….DENIAL

If life was a knife mine be razor sharp cutting through a slice
Through the normal way to play, it’s like my common law wife
Cos its ‘common’ to see me breakin ‘laws’ and im ‘married’ to fuckin strife
Content with livin, causing pain, double bladed.. Likewise on the dice
That’s double 6, the top score, peaking, who could ask for more
Happy days record plays, smoothly.. think I’ll stick to this door
The corridor is behind me people knocking flocking for ma blood
Denial comes to mind, shouting back “was ma fucking twin brov”

When a dawg asks if ya fucked his bitch….DENIAL
When ya busted for smokin the weed….DENIAL
When ya chill’n and sick of giving….DENIAL
So what I use, when being accused?….DENIAL

You get a bad reputation from confrontation it sticks like mud
Once ya labelled with that brush, hatin in the neighbour-hud
Ya get haunted at ya haunt, people taunt yes cos I flaunt
With their ladies when alone, to take em home and fuck em gaunt
Playa hatin been goin on long before, this G, at where im from
“It wasn’t me”, springs to mind like a diver drops a bomb
The wrong bitch a cop a feel, throbbing urge to make love
Denial comes to mind, shouting back “was ma fucking twin brov”

When a dawg asks if ya fucked his bitch….DENIAL
When ya busted for smokin the weed….DENIAL
When ya chill’n and sick of giving….DENIAL
So what I use, when being accused?….DENIAL

I get arrested so try an contest it, aint gettin ma privacy molested
For an ounce of hash a bought with cash the fucking law detected
Think on ya feet, be discrete start thinkin like a detective
What the fuck, try an get unstuck with a big bong as an incentive
“It isn’t mine” except it, with a caution released by truth distortion
But my ganj’ slipped through my hands, its on a journey to weed abortion
Lies make the world go round, pound for pound they knock truth down
Frowned upon by many, hell shit the opposite to what ive found
Around my way it’s known, I do what you don’t so fuck the gov
Denial comes to mind, shouting back “was ma fucking twin brov”

When a dawg asks if ya fucked his bitch….DENIAL
When ya busted for smokin the weed….DENIAL
When ya chill’n and sick of giving….DENIAL
So what I use, when being accused?….DENIAL yes fuckin DENIAL!!!

This was pretty good...Flow was off a bit but it was still good though....Vocab was good i thought, nothing really wrong about that in this piece...Chorus was nice, i liked that....Multies were pretty good as well...structured it nicely....overall it was a good piece and a good read...keep at it and keep dropping.

yo this was illness in idea and graphic word nature damn this was tight

Tight.
Lost me a lil towards the end, had to re read but I feel you.
I like it.....
Props.
(Aragorn bows respectfully)

Sorry, for more detail the third verse was a lil fuzzy at first but I got the Gidst of it. I think the word technique was cool I would like to hear the beat. The chorus seems short but I don't know how long the pause is for.
Decent as I said before.

yeah its a slow chorus, like a sorta 50 style.....so yeah thanx dawgs....keep it coming and i'll do the same back...Pc

this was everywhere dawg..

I didnt feel a constitant topic..

tha chorus needs work

and some of ur multis are way too forced

also tha format and or structure of ur drop was sub par..

i liked some of it but this was just ok

1

this was a hto drop..i dotn have a lotta time rigth now ill write more later..props kid

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thnx people.........keep it coming........Pc

i cant pick up your concept what are you writing about?
honestly this was pretty wack, most of your lines didnt even make since, or were just so far off any topic.

it flowed ok but other then that i dont like it, elevate