Rules:
1.No crew votes
2.No hate votes
3.No d/r votes
4.5 bars
5.you spit first
6.No feeding
7.Verses due tonight

To win U'd have 2 Cheat, Take Over the Role of Springfields Mayor
Like your Location and group O-Town, This kid is gettin No Where
To gain a Large ego U'd have to take Penis Enlargement Vitamins
Red Lives Up to his Record, thats why no one wants to Battle Him (signature)
Ya not hard, ur Limp, my flow will Drown u like Babies in Yards
Red could never Move me, He's a Buckingham Palace Gaurd
So many Quoted Lines, Is it Jesus' Scriptures ur tryin to Teach-Us?
Like babies in Wombs with out Cords, Flow U could never Feed-Us
I'll shut you down, your a Failed Program, so Controll-Alt-Delete
Why's ur Profile say emcee when ur affaid to Compete wit Elite? (occupation)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91900

^Scared of elite battlers

and about the 'Jesus trying to teach us line'.........just read up on him.......so may quoted words.....he probably wont quote now after he saw this personal

Will drop by midnight(west coast time)
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Start....8:23P.M
Your using bolds for what?,it'll just give you a few cord cuts//
This whack emcee can't reach the window of oppurtunity cause I just put it a few floors up!/~1~(Just the 1st bar)
Pick up pennies and your rhymes still coulden't make sense,the winner of this battle is relevent//
Kid you actually think your ill?..please man you dont even show a single trace of talent!/~2~
Kid claims to be looking for blood?...out of you & me your not even the rentless wun//
With a verse like that man on a decent site you woulden't even make the guest list son!/~3~(Just the 3rd bar)
I'll fist-this-dyke...despite stones & audio Dragon will always rock the mic//
I'll get this done and serve you now,you wanna go twice?..with a verse like that me and God dont deserve you life!/~4~
Close it like this
Kill this vet..like retard below level you need all the help you can get//
I bet,that Zenith is in a wet suit proud to be surfing the internet!//~5~
(End time,8:36)
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Your using bolds for what?,


^the fuck was that.......u sure u didnt copy and paste, there werent any bolds in my verse retard.............anyways vote peeps

opener:zenith
closer:zenith- he dont look like a vet
wordplay:tie
structure:tie
punches:zenith
overall:zenith


i think angellic used te copy and paste a lil bit here, if u didnt u had a nice drop but try and aim your punches at him.

aiight no hate
peace

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sorry for the freepost, but i put the name angellic, in there i actuall meant red dragon.

i jus peeped the other kids battle.

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in my opinion...the verses were pretty even..z had better personals, but red dragon got better flow. but both of u got skill...no hate here....

yo red dragon please hit up my battle with an honest vote...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91283

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Upppin more.............................................. ......................................and personals can b good I agree.But not good enough to win a battle,he had hardly any strong punches.Just a few personals that I technically gave him.So it should be who has better flow & more consistent punches to win a battle.Thats how I think you guys should judge this.
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opener: RD
Closer: Tie
Flow: RD
Personals: Z
Punches: tie
Winner: RD
You both got skill. No hate there. Hit this site up, it's been sleepin. Peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91312

opening - RD
flow - RD
punches - both
Personals - zenith
wordplay - both
structure - both
closing - both

overall - if i could vote my vote would go to redragon

check out my battles below...............

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zenith all the way i think he had advance punchlines while red was dropping some okay lines but nothing too complex and kinda lame actually both flows wer subpar vote zenith

battles i got two going now look at them please vote if you can

^^^^If your gonna vote,don't forget to poll^^^^
its,1-1 in the poll votes and we're still uppin some more ya'll please don't sleep
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Punches Rd
Flow Tie
Personals Rd
Overall Rd
Vote Rd

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