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Old 11-14-03, 10:33 PM   #1
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Dear Mat...(bitch)

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this is for this wanksta mat...we battled the one day and made fun of my girl who hes never met...so i ate his ass, and im still frustrated that he still acts hard around me...so im just venting...

yo matty, why dont you go back to where you belong
the male strip club - wearing some red pumps and thongs
how you gunna act like you know my girl
i didnt talk about your mom and i still rocked her world
matter of fact, i dont know why you should be mad
and its disrespectful to be yelling at your dad
cuz i created you - i didnt mean for my protection to break
so when i kill you with this shit im just correcting my mistake
you fake - you act hard but i know that your phony
you've never eaten someones verse - your lookin a lil bony
so you tried to put some beef on - you shouldnt have chose me
ive beaten your mom, and im the only thing your hoe sees
and that leaves you - the last person on my list
but make it known, not the last person that ill diss
so why you trying to act black - its like your on crack son
you aint hard, plus your skins whiter than micheal Jackson
so queer the kids gunna need to start bringin a purse
I was never full of shit until I ate his verse
other kids tried to battle me, and this kid stepped up directly
hes just an afterthought, and my memory served him correctly
now hes like baby “what happened to that boy?”
I don’t give a fuck if hes living, cuz killing him was my ploy
so don’t talk about my girl again bitch
or I wont take it easy, ill show you the end bitch

just venting, check it out if you want and feedback is appreciated
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Old 11-14-03, 10:40 PM   #2
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it aint bad funny was a strong point but missed something the lil umph to it
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Old 11-15-03, 12:01 AM   #3
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hey, bitin my crit....lol
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