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11-15-03, 12:03 AM
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[PEEP]-'Tha Cause'-[New Shit!]
IP: CD15 C29E
CAP all MAD cats, Raise your Text above ya like HangMan Sik Brained and spits like incest, tha Brotha is Bangin! Niggas status be under cover lames strayin to Gay Laying Nay Sayin against prick cravings, Fake thugs inflict Sprayin Pick your remains up, but amongst your crews also Slain up, them medical bills gonna cost ya a Ball Load Resortin back to tha beginin of ya Rap career, Open Mic at Apollo Rammin a mic across yo, pecks split open Like baked potato foil &Saving tha sour cream for your bitch, I’m scorchin, Nelly a Boil Getting Helly “Hot in Herre” like tannin wrapped around copper coil But he got tha Midwest Fukked, like tradin J.Rose, and moving Forward’s My life thirsts for words, Nomad holds Tha Holy Grail of VocalCords Focus on me dude, and Tha Nomad approaches, He Who See's Evil, Bad Karma keeps you, on tha level beneath you Neal can sleep thru, tha most outrageous Quiet Storms Awake devouring Pawns, My might's Power forms like Voltrons Diablo Context, It’s complex, his Temperature Reads in tha Thousands Burnin niggas to ash, gotta Urn my trust, Blow all tha embers up out em Dismember there Captains of Hip-Hop, Urn Fans when cats Spit Pac Shit, not original just a sample of shit rocked, Re-Lax sit & shit-hot Putrid Text, grab tha gas mask to view your text, hold breaths Reload Text, take a chance on credit, shoot tha dice double yo bets No more over looks on tha kid, I stand clever, beyond Moutain Peaks I sprinted up Everest &avoided endeavors, Strapped w/a pound of Seeds Left of trail of Treez, came back tha next year and joined Tha Mile High Team Defile High Beams, I give cops tha slip like soap dropped in prison Ya kiddin, spittin dry heat off rhythm, Livid off Nomad’s mention Focus on me dude, and Tha Nomad approaches, He Who See's Evil, Bad Karma keeps you, on tha level beneath you Neal can sleep thru, tha most outrageous Quiet Storms Awake devouring Pawns, My might's Power forms like Voltrons http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91710 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91934 Last edited by Nomad : 11-15-03 at 12:06 AM. |
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11-15-03, 12:08 AM
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IP: 6521 D40E
////...5/10 ...//// ionno what else to say, u kinda kep a lil rapidfire flow going, tried to be complex, tried to multi....major work needed, but i give u props fo rit, you can usualy tell when soemone has a future or not, u got somethin, u could go someplace......jus depends on how much u wanna work at it...good luck.....and u peep now or nuthin an open mic by Sublime D
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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