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a lil sumthin sumthin Translucant 6 22 11-18-03 10:50 AM
by Funn DementaLL

I fucking miss you ( 1 2 ) Ill-Mental 17 123 11-18-03 10:46 AM
by Funn DementaLL

Rules of the Game Lulong 8 47 11-18-03 10:40 AM
by Funn DementaLL

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Facing down, I dare not give the mirror something to reflect\\
Coz the spiteful effigy only gives me something to regret\\
Why would I respect this chimerical variant of me\\?
How will I know what to protect?
If my lungs fail an I can’t breath\\
Don’t kid yourself, ignore the taunts, you a man now\\
Ignorance has its advantages, don’t try to understand how\\
Knowin’ the answers, back of the class, hands down\\
Envying the gangsta’s, coz figures bow when the growl\\

(To the ground)

Unaware if the case backfires, you the first to see six feet\\
Coz if bad luck comes in ‘3’s … well, that is six feet\\
The reapers busy in Iraq now, so listen up jus retreat\\
If you not a tramp how can you claim to be from the street\\
I diminish spines, so you can’t get your back-up\\
Unfinished crimes, achieved once I become a Rapper\\
Others imitate, I seen more flavour in a cracker\\
Some would kill, or die to succeed like the 9/11 hi-jackers\\
Spittin’ images, similar to the illusion\\
If I can kill brain cells wit words, I can organize confusion\\
In a position trapped, like dem kids havin’ children\\
Abortion victims, jus imagine living with the allusion\\
The thought sheds comparison to the day I abused my mother\\
Repent my immoral deeds,
I hug myself… screamin’ how much I love her\\

(Hook)
Done many things I regret, suffer from nostalgia…
is the future ready yet?\\
Avoid turning around, don’t take a second look…
what’s next?\\
16, an da 7 years…
got me scared to reflect\\

Puzzled brain work,
need to be alone to straighten my chain of thought\\
Untangling my necklace, a loner reacting to the demons resort\\
Closed my eye lids, fuck sights, all I need is my two lips\\
A clean floor, my two palms, to gain defence from the crucifix\\
Maybe I am demented, what you care bout belief\\
It’s more desirable to me, than masturbating for relief\\
You must be the crazy one to believe your bliss can compete\\
I’ll show you whose elite, when the angles reach their peak\\
Still not lookin’ back,
disgusted by the perverts feeding their addiction\\
Drinkin’ out the cup, my once lost mind pissed in\\
I choose not to notice,
coz I don’t want my past an present mixing\\
Yeah I hustled, not the drugs. But the prescriptions\\
I sit on a stall, in a dark room, burning captured moments\\
Blistering the prints that represent my present opponent\\
Irritated the dem rats, my poison cater for the rodents\\
Then I was a broken man… I’m straight, now I’m solvent\\
Demolished all links to my history,
exposed what you’re sights won’t see\\
An it’s gonna stay that way coz my past looks better behind me\\


(Hook)
Done many things I regret, suffer from nostalgia… is the future ready yet?\\
Avoid turning around, don’t take a second look… what’s next?\\
16, an da 7 years… got me scared to reflect\\

Felt the emotion you put in2 this, i always like readin yo' shit. U have talent.. Keep droppin Homie.. Peace Holla

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

i agree very talented work twin hot peace

Thanx, uppin'

uppin'

yo tight i was feelin da hook

ok uppin dis an a vote from my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92827

whoa...thankd for the feed back on mine...and this piece was great..i found some simplistic lines...but you flipped them and made a very academical point....whick is hard to do but you did it...this was overall one of your better drops i liked it every1 reads this an has summin ta think bout after very tight keep it up pz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

cool, thanx yet still uppin'

good shit mate.......reppin uk strong in this, makin the USunderstand we got talent here too.............

Our collab will be done in bout 20

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Uppin' thanx NOK, I really need votes on my battle against LM, its 2-o at the moment, here's the link jus a quick vote... PLEASE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92451

uppin'

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