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Old 11-18-03, 09:32 AM   #1
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[Father VS Son Match] Evolve VS 13th Disciple

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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03

Loser Has To Leave: "I Was Sonned By __________" In His Sig
For A Month


Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!
 
Old 11-18-03, 01:11 PM   #2
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......its about time for this match up......

dad...


ur going down.................
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Old 11-18-03, 01:15 PM   #3
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Kids These Days!! Time For Some Discipl-in
 
Old 11-18-03, 05:31 PM   #4
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fucka wait.....i'll let u read this....and try to top it....pops




Father & Son...but never followed in ur footsteps...its easy to tell..
cuz Daddy....i handle nuthin but Elite's...& u handle nuthin but L's..
i know ur madder than hell...in all sites...Cam stays givin u da boot
reality check!...their kids...while u still battle wearin a tie & a suit!..
ur no newb...or a herb...won't sit here talk shit & say that ur wack
look at the facts...u been at text since Michael Jackson was black!
16-1 is where ur at... its not suprising....how u fucked em so quick
cuz hell.....even at ur birth.......Richard was already born as a Dick!
shit...tell RB about Divinity,my name,my wife..its been once told...
lets reveal sumthin about u...u make Born To Kill look far from old!
i'm sold...convinced....on my theory...now let me tell my hunches...
That I'll Even Bite ur style.....
just to show that...
it equals up to many L O N G A S S E X T E N D E D P U N C H E S!!

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Originally posted by 13th Disciple

That I'll Even Bite ur style just to show that it equals up to many
L O N G A S S E X T E N D E D P U N C H E S!!



^see..u mighta fool'd others..but c'mon pops..i learn from the best
but who woulda knew like frauders in court...i'll question ur text?..
we talked about sex....bitches...the mic and elevating to spit....
ironic...how i Evolved into excellence...& u dEVOLVEd into shit!.....
its time for u to quit....retire....leave....just give it up...........HA!....
funny..last week u took a loss but its no Mystery who Murdered ya
like a bra...i came strapped..ready...hey..heres sumthin neva seen
ur my father...but yet...ur a MEMBER to MY crew........REgime...


.....good luck papa.....
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Old 11-19-03, 03:42 PM   #5
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For The Record.. Im One Year Older Than Him
& Check Divinity's Pic Thread For Best Effect


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=4

im starting to Doubt he's my Son...so i'll figure out his replacement
cause there's no way i'd Waste my Sperm
on Big Tigger from the Basement!!!
face it, you've been chasin me...trying to replace the fact that
you got Chrit on YOUR Mind more than HIS Played NC State Hat
since way back... this cat has tracked the path i've stepped
so i Laughed a Little when he asked me to join Regime
& ALOT ^^when I Left
except, i haven't Mentioned it yet... did i Mention he's Gay & Sick?
cause he likes to Eat MC's.. after he Mention's my name is Dick (Sig)
i paid attention & seen you try to be slick.. sorry pal, im no dummy
& i might be a Year Older...but Your Married w/ Children like Al Bundy
its funny.. him trying to son me on how many years i been on text
but if Age is Just a Number...
Just look at his Number of Aged Concepts!!
i dont engage threats.. i just disarm & disperse blank verses from Vets
which makes 13 Odd because I Dont Consider Him One Yet
now lets get back to his pic again.. so i can start picking him apart
its only fitting some one w/ a Bird Chest would have a Chicken's Heart (Divinity)
& boy im a retard... for not making this known a little sooner

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Originally posted by The End
You sure that's 13th? Hmm.. fake ass Roy Jones Jr.


your a known loser.. a nobody who i hope will elevate & choose the stairs
but i mean... your the 13th Disciple... after 12... Who Really Cares??


Close Your Mouth When Grown Folks Are Talking Bitch!!

Last edited by Evolve : 11-19-03 at 04:00 PM.
 
Old 11-19-03, 05:11 PM   #6
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lol....nice verse pops....no hate.....


love ya
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Old 11-19-03, 06:55 PM   #7
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13th Quotables:
look at the facts...u been at text since Michael Jackson was black!
...LMAO ... Shit was dope...

ur my father...but yet...ur a MEMBER to MY crew........REgime...
...Was aight ... But not really true...

funny..last week u took a loss but its no Mystery who Murdered ya
...Wordplay was aight ... Nice punch but played concept...

Overall 13th had an aight verse ... Some nice lines ... Some filler ... Average all around ... Props

Evolve Quotables:
cause there's no way i'd Waste my Sperm
on Big Tigger from the Basement!!!
...LMFAO ... Already killed 'em w/ the opener...

so i Laughed a Little when he asked me to join Regime
& ALOT ^^when I Left
... Ha ... Dope shit ...

& i might be a Year Older...but Your Married w/ Children like Al Bundy
... Dope punch ... So true ...

but if Age is Just a Number...
Just look at his Number of Aged Concepts!!
... Nice ...

but i mean... your the 13th Disciple... after 12... Who Really Cares??
... Dope ass finisher ...

Overall Evolve had a really dope verse ... Very witty and dope punches throughout the entire verse ... props ...

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My vote goes to Evolve this battle ... Cuz he juss came all around wittier and better than 13th did this time around ... Both came nicely tho ... But Evolve juss came out on top his verse had me laughin' the whole way thru practically ... And all of his shit was based on true facts so it made it that much more better ...

Vote : Evolve
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Old 11-19-03, 08:51 PM   #8
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Hmm...

This was a helluva lot closer than Mentill said...
I'll post a breakdown tomorrow
 
Old 11-20-03, 07:42 AM   #9
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^Word...

This was really close.......good battle
13th dropped a tight verse and so did 'volve

Father & Son...but never followed in ur footsteps...its easy to tell..
cuz Daddy....i handle nuthin but Elite's...& u handle nuthin but L's..
^Aight opener..
i know ur madder than hell...in all sites...Cam stays givin u da boot
reality check!...their kids...while u still battle wearin a tie & a suit!..
^Hehe..nice..not lol, but a lil titter
ur no newb...or a herb...won't sit here talk shit & say that ur wack
look at the facts...u been at text since Michael Jackson was black!
^I dont care bout yall opinions...i liked this...made me laugh
16-1 is where ur at... its not suprising....how u fucked em so quick
cuz hell.....even at ur birth.......Richard was already born as a Dick!
^haha, yea again nice....
shit...tell RB about Divinity,my name,my wife..its been once told...
lets reveal sumthin about u...u make Born To Kill look far from old!
^Hehe, again only aigh
i'm sold...convinced....on my theory...now let me tell my hunches...
That I'll Even Bite ur style.....
just to show that...
it equals up to many L O N G A S S E X T E N D E D P U N C H E S!!
^Dope ish...lmfao

quote:
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Originally posted by 13th Disciple

That I'll Even Bite ur style just to show that it equals up to many
L O N G A S S E X T E N D E D P U N C H E S!!
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^see..u mighta fool'd others..but c'mon pops..i learn from the best
but who woulda knew like frauders in court...i'll question ur text?..
^mmmm, aigh
we talked about sex....bitches...the mic and elevating to spit....
ironic...how i Evolved into excellence...& u dEVOLVEd into shit!.....
^Good flip on a used concept
its time for u to quit....retire....leave....just give it up...........HA!....
funny..last week u took a loss but its no Mystery who Murdered ya
^hahaa....good shit
like a bra...i came strapped..ready...hey..heres sumthin neva seen
ur my father...but yet...ur a MEMBER to MY crew........REgime...
^Good finish

Liked your verse 13th...made me laugh hard at times...
...and not as hard some others
Good wordplay, punches and personals.....Dope verse

im starting to Doubt he's my Son...so i'll figure out his replacement
cause there's no way i'd Waste my Sperm
on Big Tigger from the Basement!!!
^lmfao....good opener...hahaha
face it, you've been chasin me...trying to replace the fact that
you got Chrit on YOUR Mind more than HIS Played NC State Hat
^Hehehe good shit...
since way back... this cat has tracked the path i've stepped
so i Laughed a Little when he asked me to join Regime
& ALOT ^^when I Left
^hhhhhaaaaaaa....v.nice
except, i haven't Mentioned it yet... did i Mention he's Gay & Sick?
cause he likes to Eat MC's.. after he Mention's my name is Dick(Sig)
^lmao....
i paid attention & seen you try to be slick.. sorry pal, im no dummy
& i might be a Year Older...but Your Married w/ Children like Al Bundy
^....ha fuckedy haha....
its funny.. him trying to son me on how many years i been on text
but if Age is Just a Number...
Just look at his Number of Aged Concepts!!
^Dope........llllloooooooooollll
i dont engage threats.. i just disarm & disperse blank verses from Vets
which makes 13 Odd because I Dont Consider Him One Yet
^Hehe good punch
now lets get back to his pic again.. so i can start picking him apart
its only fitting some one w/ a Bird Chest would have a Chicken's Heart (Divinity)
^hehe...nice
& boy im a retard... for not making this known a little sooner
You sure that's 13th? Hmm.. fake ass Roy Jones Jr.
^Dope finish.........lmao

Great verse man, props......wordplay, punches personals.......yea
yea

So i gotta give this to evolve for consistency...
he just kept em comin all the way through
Where as 13th had a couple of meh lines..

Vote- Evolve
Hella good battle Props to both of you........Pz.
 
Old 11-20-03, 08:11 AM   #10
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2-0 Me... Nice Verse 13..

& Chrit dont let the fact that i cracked on your hat sway your vote
just vote honestly.. your opinion is respected
 
Old 11-20-03, 10:20 AM   #11
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Vote- Evolve...

This was close as hell however....
The Roy Jones Jr and Big Tigger lines had me laughing...
And the Eating Dick line was nice...

13th came nice as hell as well...
But...
..Evolve takes this in a close ass battle
 
Old 11-20-03, 10:26 AM   #12
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Vote- Evolve.

That roy jones line took it.
It was hilarious.

Very close... best battle i've seen in here.
Props to 13th... After seeing that verse my respect for u increased.
For evolve... You came hard as always...

Great battle.

Just thought Evolve had more creativity and harder hitting punches
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Old 11-20-03, 11:46 AM   #13
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4-0
 
Old 11-20-03, 12:27 PM   #14
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Shit, I was hopin this would be one of those quick breakdown battles. I'm gonna have to get back on after Class/Registration/Work Study. I'll vote then.
 
Old 11-20-03, 01:07 PM   #15
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13th...

Father & Son...but never followed in ur footsteps...its easy to tell..
cuz Daddy....i handle nuthin but Elite's...& u handle nuthin but L's..
Opener isnt too bad, couldve been harder.
i know ur madder than hell...in all sites...Cam stays givin u da boot
reality check!...their kids...while u still battle wearin a tie & a suit!..
Ahaha...not bad not bad
ur no newb...or a herb...won't sit here talk shit & say that ur wack
look at the facts...u been at text since Michael Jackson was black!
I agree with Fgee...fuckin hilarious.!!!
16-1 is where ur at... its not suprising....how u fucked em so quick
cuz hell.....even at ur birth.......Richard was already born as a Dick!
ehh..not really..
shit...tell RB about Divinity,my name,my wife..its been once told...
lets reveal sumthin about u...u make Born To Kill look far from old!
Decent.nothin special
i'm sold...convinced....on my theory...now let me tell my hunches...
That I'll Even Bite ur style.....
just to show that...
it equals up to many L O N G A S S E X T E N D E D P U N C H E S!!
Haha ill shit
see..u mighta fool'd others..but c'mon pops..i learn from the best
but who woulda knew like frauders in court...i'll question ur text?..
decent
we talked about sex....bitches...the mic and elevating to spit....
ironic...how i Evolved into excellence...& u dEVOLVEd into shit!.....
Id imagine that diss would be played as fuck..decent flip tho
its time for u to quit....retire....leave....just give it up...........HA!....
funny..last week u took a loss but its no Mystery who Murdered ya
Dope..nice persnal.
like a bra...i came strapped..ready...hey..heres sumthin neva seen
ur my father...but yet...ur a MEMBER to MY crew........REgime...
solid finisher..

'Volve..

im starting to Doubt he's my Son...so i'll figure out his replacement
cause there's no way i'd Waste my Sperm
on Big Tigger from the Basement!!!
nice opener
face it, you've been chasin me...trying to replace the fact that
you got Chrit on YOUR Mind more than HIS Played NC State Hat
haha nice shit
since way back... this cat has tracked the path i've stepped
so i Laughed a Little when he asked me to join Regime
& ALOT ^^when I Left
not bad not bad
except, i haven't Mentioned it yet... did i Mention he's Gay & Sick?
cause he likes to Eat MC's.. after he Mention's my name is Dick(Sig)
OUUUUUCH
i paid attention & seen you try to be slick.. sorry pal, im no dummy
& i might be a Year Older...but Your Married w/ Children like Al Bundy
Personals galore...dope shit.!
its funny.. him trying to son me on how many years i been on text
but if Age is Just a Number...
Just look at his Number of Aged Concepts!!
feeding...?
i dont engage threats.. i just disarm & disperse blank verses from Vets
which makes 13 Odd because I Dont Consider Him One Yet
decent
now lets get back to his pic again.. so i can start picking him apart
its only fitting some one w/ a Bird Chest would have a Chicken's Heart (Divinity)
lmao
& boy im a retard... for not making this known a little sooner
You sure that's 13th? Hmm.. fake ass Roy Jones Jr.
Hahahaha

Ahhhhhhhhh I enjoyed reading this shit, saw some funny ass personals but not too much wordplay n ish,..... you know...but my vote goes to....

'Volve....Because, he came with some dope as fuck personals, and nice punchlines...and he was consistent thru out his verse..constantly makin me laugh...but no hate to 13th, the battle was pretty dope, and it was pretty close, but i just felt that volve took it it...

pz

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