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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03

Voters Are To Vote On 2 Issues:

1) Who Won
2) Should SmokaJoka666 Be In The League.. Jack N Banks Is
Already In

Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!!!

aight...czechin...

peace
4:20

In-try Denied.

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Oh, The Irony

NwPirrelivance: peyo is the worst rapper ever
NwPirrelivance: lmao
Me: yes lol
NwPirrelivance: did you hear his audio?
Me: no..is as bad as fiori's
NwPirrelivance: worse
NwPirrelivance: i cant find it
NwPirrelivance: but its bad
Me: damn i wanted a laugh
NwPirrelivance: i could do a better audio with my text, the sound of me typing would be doper than his audio

Forgive My Structure....
10 Lines...Bleh


Smoke Wanted To Know Truth, And Why Everyone's Doubtin Him
So,I Let The Cat Outta The Bag, And It Scratched the Fuck Outta Him!
Kid Thinkin He's Underground, Well, I Am Going 2 Put Him In The Dirt
When i told him i had something i Had 2 get off My Chest,
.....This Fag Tried 2 Take Off My Shirt!
No Need 2 Reason, Im Am God, Bitch, So Fuck U & what U Belive in
And I Dont Need To Ease In, Since The Kid's Repping 666, Well,
.....Watch Me Break Even
Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah, Yeh That Kid is The Worst
I'm Even Trying Cuz If I Really Wanted To Diss You,
.......I'd Just Read YouR Verse.
All in All, To Sum It Up, U Suck, And This Battles Been A Sin
Well In The End, I'll Say Your Are Nice,
.............For Giving Me The Win!

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Oh, The Irony

NwPirrelivance: peyo is the worst rapper ever
NwPirrelivance: lmao
Me: yes lol
NwPirrelivance: did you hear his audio?
Me: no..is as bad as fiori's
NwPirrelivance: worse
NwPirrelivance: i cant find it
NwPirrelivance: but its bad
Me: damn i wanted a laugh
NwPirrelivance: i could do a better audio with my text, the sound of me typing would be doper than his audio

In This Battle I'm Last In Place....Oh Wait...I Forgot It's Backwards Day..
Self-Proclaimed?? Kid Puts Dicks On Pennies To Be Named Jackin Banks..
Ur Disabled, Cuz Ur Punches Aren't Direct Like U Was Digital Cable..
Ur Wack Labeled..Judgin Post Counts U Need To Hop Back In The Cradle..
Jack's A Whiner, Get Outta This League Kid, U Belong In The Minors..
How The Fuck Do U Expect To Beat Me, When U Can't KO 1liner?!?!?
U Gonna Die, Right? Jack Compacts Sentences To Say He Writes Tight..
Smoke Alot Of Weed? My Punches Are Like Bulls To That Red Eyesight..
My Profound Sounds More Pardoxal Than A Laughing Clown With Tears..
U Been Raped So Many Times U Got Stretch Marks Around Ur Rear..
Hit U Like A Rhino, Skills So Colorful I Turn Black Kids Albino..(not racist)
Ur Infested? I'll Give This Pussy An Appointment To The Gyno..
Everything U Spit Is A Damn Lie, Fuck This Kid Ever Seen A Man Cry..
Killin 4, I'm Jackin Shrapnel With Lyrical Koncepts Kid I'm The Franchise..


Aliases: Shrapnel, Koncept, The Franchi$e

peace
4:20

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Damn Kid I Only Went Ten, But Upz ^^^^

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Oh, The Irony

NwPirrelivance: peyo is the worst rapper ever
NwPirrelivance: lmao
Me: yes lol
NwPirrelivance: did you hear his audio?
Me: no..is as bad as fiori's
NwPirrelivance: worse
NwPirrelivance: i cant find it
NwPirrelivance: but its bad
Me: damn i wanted a laugh
NwPirrelivance: i could do a better audio with my text, the sound of me typing would be doper than his audio

Hmmm...

Vote- Koncept.

You Both Came Well.. But Smoka Yiu HAd Wayyyyy Too Much Filler In There... I Vote You IN The League And Jack N Banks For The Battle. Koncept You Came Nice My Man... Reppin Bonafide Well...

Quotables...

Smoke Wanted To Know Truth, And Why Everyone's Doubtin Him
So,I Let The Cat Outta The Bag, And It Scratched the Fuck Outta Him!

In This Battle I'm Last In Place....Oh Wait...I Forgot It's Backwards Day..
Self-Proclaimed?? Kid Puts Dicks On Pennies To Be Named Jackin Banks..


Vote- Jack N Banks

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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^^^ehh....crew votes are allowed??? sounded kinda shady only quotin the first two lines like he didn't read it....oh yeah.....my bad Jack i counted ur shit line for line and i got 14...so i wrote 14 lines....

peace
4:20

Crew Votes Are Allowed Because LLL Voters Are Honest. This Isn't FL Smoka.

I Only Quoted The First Two Lines Because They Were The Two Best... But Here I'll Break This Down Anyway...

Jack N Banks

Smoke Wanted To Know Truth, And Why Everyone's Doubtin Him
So,I Let The Cat Outta The Bag, And It Scratched the Fuck Outta Him!
Nice As Hell... Props.

Kid Thinkin He's Underground, Well, I Am Going 2 Put Him In The Dirt
When i told him i had something i Had 2 get off My Chest,
.....This Fag Tried 2 Take Off My Shirt!
Kinda Played.. But I Wasn't Feelin This One.

No Need 2 Reason, Im Am God, Bitch, So Fuck U & what U Belive in
And I Dont Need To Ease In, Since The Kid's Repping 666, Well,
.....Watch Me Break Even
Nice.

Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah, Blah, Yeh That Kid is The Worst
I'm Even Trying Cuz If I Really Wanted To Diss You,
.......I'd Just Read YouR Verse.
Wack Setup... Played Closer.
All in All, To Sum It Up, U Suck, And This Battles Been A Sin
Well In The End, I'll Say Your Are Nice,
.............For Giving Me The Win!
Good But Not Great.

SmokaJoka666

In This Battle I'm Last In Place....Oh Wait...I Forgot It's Backwards Day..
Self-Proclaimed?? Kid Puts Dicks On Pennies To Be Named Jackin Banks..
Your Best Line.. Wording Was Bad...

Ur Disabled, Cuz Ur Punches Aren't Direct Like U Was Digital Cable..
Ur Wack Labeled..Judgin Post Counts U Need To Hop Back In The Cradle..
Nah...

Jack's A Whiner, Get Outta This League Kid, U Belong In The Minors..
How The Fuck Do U Expect To Beat Me, When U Can't KO 1liner?!?!?
Ok Personal..

U Gonna Die, Right? Jack Compacts Sentences To Say He Writes Tight..
Smoke Alot Of Weed? My Punches Are Like Bulls To That Red Eyesight..
Pretty Nice Line.

My Profound Sounds More Pardoxal Than A Laughing Clown With Tears..
U Been Raped So Many Times U Got Stretch Marks Around Ur Rear..
Meh.. Decent.

Hit U Like A Rhino, Skills So Colorful I Turn Black Kids Albino..(not racist)
Ur Infested? I'll Give This Pussy An Appointment To The Gyno..
Filler Both Lines...

Everything U Spit Is A Damn Lie, Fuck This Kid Ever Seen A Man Cry..
Killin 4, I'm Jackin Shrapnel With Lyrical Koncepts Kid I'm The Franchise..
Awful Opener... Good Creativity But A Bit Of Filler There.



Basically.. Smoka You Had Too Many Stretched Lines And Filler.. With A Few Played Concepts.. I Vote Fair.. Trust.

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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Ok.

Smoka stays.

but Jack took this just a better verse.
wouldnt have done to good against the best
on the site but it was good enough.

Smoka work on better punches
the structure and flow is there

V/Jack

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aight coo....at least i can stay.....no hate to u Aisle...i wasn't bitchin...nice shit Jack...uppin #1...........

peace
4:20

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Yeah Jack took this... but smoka should stay in the league...

Punches hit harder with jack and his verse was wittier... good battle.

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Smoka Came Ok...Had Potential To Drop Some Nice Punches But Didnt Pull Them Off...He Should Stay In The League..

Jack Had Sum Very Nice Punches, Your Opener Was Nice...And A Few More Lines Throughout Ya Verse Were Nice Aswell..

Vote - Jack
Batter Verse And Punches..

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LLL LW Champ
<center>Soft Focus</center>

Vote: SmokaJoka666...
his bars were even and the punchlines were nice. It was too hard to catch the flow Jack N. was trying for. He didn't have that many good punchlines, 'cept maybe the 1st one.