oops, my bad about the thread before.

blind spit. 25 minutes.

everything else house rules.

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you still forgot to hit the battle link lmfao............................................. .................................................. ........you want me to make it

oh wait my bad nvm..................aiight checkin in................................................ ..............

no, i didnt..

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no hurry the hell up and check it
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My lyrics will put you in a flat line,Smack you back into time/
It's my time to shine,My rhymes i type packin more power than nines/
This kat thought i couldn't spit,got him paralyzed in shock/
I'll walk in your crib no need to knock,punch off your lips before you get a chance to talk/
Every letter I press blasts a bullet,got my hand on theT button aint afraid to pull it/
Hit you with 5 letters,turned your afro into a mullet/
tappin your phone,Got your face on this chrome,got you scared when you alone/
I'll send you home,Your lyrics stinks,my rhymes is the calone/
You dead,got Mr printed on your chest in red/
you sayin your last words in your death bed,who knew a rap battle would leave you dead/

whoaa!!! your turn................................told you i was gonna show you my new flow.............................................. ...........................

check it out.

my rhymes are tight and fresh, poppin at you like wine corks
...your rhymes are loose and rotten, like the pussy of a dike's corpse

they hate-your-rhymes, ill add one more loss to that six of yours
...so you'll make em "pay-the-price" with"raedar's body now in stores"

my "rhymes will flatten the gas pedal", runnin over you, coloring concrete with blood-stripes...
its like a reverse thing, cause my "foot could physically beat your rhymes"

thats when i fucked your mom so deep, my dick went through her stomach
Wendy's doesnt go well with my dick...the fat bitch loves chicken nuggets...

my verse is passionate, it will make your eyes frantic..your lines wouldnt be deep, if they were glued to the titanic

im done with the verse. my rhymes are like your period, girl...
cuz i know it hurts, but seven losses aint the end of the world

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i did that shit in about 6 minutes. after viewing your previous shit, i knew i wouldnt need anything strong.

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aiight good battle i think this is close............................................. ...........vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

Open- julio
Metas - mista
Creavitity - julio
Personals - julio
Flow - tie
Finish - tie
Abuse - julio

vote = julio

closer mr...a lot more heat, but still lackin the more creative concepts

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Open- junio
Flow - junio
Metas - mista
Creavitity - junio
Personals - junio
enjoyment - junio
Finish - close but junio
overall - junio

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aiight yo thanx for the honest feedback i will take wat u say into consideration. believe it or not every time u critisize me on my lyrics i work on wat u say and improve on it like that strcture and shit so thanx for the votes dawg