10line max.....blind spit....15 mintutes to spit

this is for who stays and goes in the Lyrikal murder crew

so all votes must be explained very well

must flollow:

opening -
flow -
multis -
metas -
personals -
complexity -
structure -
vocab -
closing -

cyph = /9
oli = /9

my vote -

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ite checkin fuck it i said ide drop l8r but ill key a quick verse and get this bitch out the crew.lol.......................................... ............................pz

yo listen

yo cyph when you battle me~protection is a must,
but even if your wearing a mask, you'd still be another one biteing the dust,
in this battle this faggot aint even comeing close to emergeing,
my lyrics will split this prick like~a dick splits a virgin,
in the crew thread this bitch hateing me is the number one discusion,
he didnt realise ill blaze him at onece~simular to a spontainiuos combustion,
so as you leave the crew i can see your a bitch cuase your tears are jerkin,
this faggot got merk so quick he had no time to up this shit~so ill leave him the link to my merkin

.......................pz

oli-dogg....

Yo Oli-Dogg...Upgrade the New Name But Ya Still in Pre.:K:.-
Along wit his Spray-.:K:.'s From the UK-Nuff said now Move outta Aids Way/1

Time for some Viscouse Spit
9 Millimeter-Shit for Wife Beaters'...So I Blast in Mass-Fuk D's Ima .:K:. Feater-
Loss Treater..Crew Seater...This is what u get for Wantin' Co-Leader-/2
Producin such Punch On Oli'...Turn dis Dawg inta a Pulp'd up Miniture Coli-
Dis Kid play's wit so much Wood~R&B Startin to Label' His First Name Holly-/3
Talkin shit in Threads...I turn ya Head wit Pics'got ya Pissed-cus I aint off the list-
Only way u flow wit Cyph-is-assists....Every Punch I throw I Hit 10 times da Fists/4
Don't hate what u aint got~if this crew was BFI u'd be the first we pick up-
Cus Basicly u suck-to be ommitted as recycled stuff an dumbed in Garbage trucks/5

time for some votes up in here------------------
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Flow: K
Structure: K
Punches: K
Multis: Cyph
Metas: Cyph
Similies: K
Personals: Cyph
Enjoyability: K

Also Cyph's verse seemed pre-written for the name oli dogg wit' that bit at the beginning added later in a hurry

Vote=K

^^ this cat dont know what hes talkin bout...no hate K i aint takin sides just i know for a fact he didnt pre-write....he told me when he was finished and he posted right after....

uppin for some real votes............

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^^oli-dogg is in his sig^^it's not pre-writtin i had no intentions of battlin dis herb till like 20 minutes b4 hand.......
good thing u dont have 100 posts...cus it's be a shame for such a mis-concieved opinion to pass thru-

get an idea on how to vote within the next 68 posts,,,,

uppin(2)

aiyo....................this shit is crew votes only....just wanted to establish it...............

sorry for the freepost.....................

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I can't poll vote, but I'll drop an opinion.

Battle wasn't very interesting. First kid came in with weak punches. Even his hardest punches were below mediocre. Wasn't very consistant, flow wasn't very fluent. Overall a weak verse to me. Second kid came in with a pretty weak verse too. I didn't see even one punch in the whole verse that I liked. If I was to vote I'd give the win to K but since I can't, you have my opinion.

opening - Oli (Cyphs was too confusin and repetative)
flow - Oli (neither on was good, but Oli's was better)
multis - Cyph (Oli had few to none)
metas - Oli (There were hardly any in both of yalls verses)
personals - Oli (Olis hit harder)
complexity - Cyph (harder words wins this)
structure - Oli (shouldn't be a catergory)
vocab - Cyph (Cyph took this definitly)
closing - Cyph (both were wack)

cyph = 4/9
oli = 5/9

my vote - Oli
No hate just a vote

People arent reading........there lookin at records and posts....

a nother dik ride mis-conseption......please....crew votes only like envy said.....

people that judge before read stay out................bottom line~

I QUIT THIS SITE.....I CANT HANDLE HORRIFIC MIND'S....

THIS SHOUDL BE 5-0.....I QUIT-PC*1*
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^^^What a bitch. I vote Oil Dog because of a better verse...period. He killed this cat, with every catergorie checked off. Good verse though, not the best, okay job.

Vote: Oil Dogg