5 votes = win
3-0 = KO
1 hour to drop
No dickride/hate/crew votes
good luck

Imma drop a quick key...


Aiyo my verses'll leave ya 'out of breath' cause I spit wit intentions to push ya Lung-Back..
If ya "Soaked ya RhymeBook" in "tobassco sauce" You Still couldn't have A "HOT COME-BACK"..

Listen If U "Died before" I Keyed this verse would be the only way I "pre-HEARSED IT"]
As Time Pass U Should get Betta looks Like U Reversed It]
I had to run the whole front line before niggas felt my Animosity]
"Robin" couldn't "make Sense(cents)" if he was a "Prostitute wit Philosphies"]

I aint flippin-keys, Im at home wit a Rhymebook thats why Im Advance-at-Spitting-kEYs}
You like? "A Batter wit No Hands "..theres no "Chance-at-Hitting-ME}
I throw ya "body in mediterrean" so u Can Leave a "Leg-At-Sea(Leg-acy)"}
Then take ya "Dome off ya Shoulders" so u can be "a Head-of-Me"}
"Robin's" history, finished, paralyzed, cant even walk-slick}
After this Battle Imma put ya head in "Toilet-Water" and Dare U to "Talk-Shyt"}

Drop ya verse kid .

Waiting for ya verse .

uppin for your verse mannn spit god .

This kid gets put in cardiac arrest when he loses his -heart- when he's steps behind-my-bars
This battle turn into an all out massacre when I wreck this yung kids head and redesign-his-body-wit-scars//

Like cheap weed Yung gettin smoked like a weak-herb
Being a master at the game of scrabble and he still cant get a decent play-on-words//

If you were spitting texas pete your flows still wouldn't be heat,
Dont even come at me with that shit cuz you gettin ripped more times than hookers-on-the-street//

Yung'll get 8(ate) multiple times and still not hav met-a-4(metaphors) STD's the only way you could stay sick...I guess thats why you slept-wit-whores//

Like old men with no dentures you aint got effective spits, yo I'll just spit in reverse now ya got tips//

i'll leave it at that.

Robin your lines ramble on an' I'm bored by the end of them vote=yung
The text that you entered is too short please have an opinion that takes up more space

Whats a good battle but i feel head wrecka had better punchlines and creativity and those are essential to when a battle and Robin i felt his drop wasnt long enough

aight yonug took this had hell a word play good punches and good flow...Robin i didnt like ur verse too much maybe only the meta 4 line but you didnt connect direct punches....

uppin fa votes .

Poll vote on this please............................................ ..............................................

structure = none
flow = none
punches = Yung
creativity= Yung
metas = Yung

vote = yung

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the vote down

Opener:young
Flow:young
Structure:robin
Punches:young
Creativity:tie
Close:both were tight but young was jus a bit better


overall Young

hit this wid an honest vote


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=94204

peace