ok paste ur shit in here.....no sense in making rules for the verse limit or anything cuz u already wrote urs....

I'll post within 48 hours after u paste urs in here...(probably less but I want to have an extra day incase something comes up)

peace

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yo yo yo check it out ya’ll

scope it ut ya’ll

Yo you think your a rapper?
rockin million dolla wrist clox
you got your bling bling out of a cereal box.
you cant stand to handle,
cuz the newbie will dismantle
ya with his mad handle.
yo rapid fire, hand over your brain cuz boy i gotta tune it
kid this is ghetto hip hop 101 and i’m the G-UNIT
While i rock my Nike’s this kid rocks his kix from payless
yo i dont wanna battle rapid fire, hes already a gay mess
i wanted to battle and this kid called me a whore
boy we all know ur the homo that perfers the back door
my rhymes are to ill
leavin ya head sore
over ya head i soar
i fly over ya like a mutha fuckin vulture
all you rhymes are weak influenced by pop culture
you weak dont even post a verse rapid fire
you dont wanna fuck with hiper AKA live wire
i dont wanna battle u if i’m the one you admire
use a faggot i dont wanna battle you if i’m ur sexual desire
ok kiddo you dont wanna mess with a lyrical empire
cuz trust me the empire strikes back
and th empire will crack a 2x4 across your back
with full impact

iight...lemme do this..

ayo..


This kid's got less experience than kelly price in a porn movie//
faggot ass would still be gay on a hot date with 4 groupies//
it's like a horror movie the way I take u apart//
like mean supermodels impalin ya chest I'm breakin ya heart//
like u raped in the park everyone watchin u get fucked//
u ain't got tha 'brains' to battle even gettin ya 'dick sucked'//
seein this verse, u shit ya pants like kids in diapers//
gettin 'sugar' from a guy is what got this MC HIPER//
this kid's scared, look..he's fake n he's shook//
it's like a game of chess cuz I'm takin this 'rook'//(rookie)
u like wet paper the way that I rip you, nobody miss u//
they laugh as I squat down n whipe my ass with ya skin 'tissue'...


iight I know that was less lines than urs...but my lines are longer..lets get the votes...

peace

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weak battle not much from newbie at all

opener - rapid
closer - rapid lol that was funny
punches - rapid
personals - none...both of you should use more
wordplay - rapid nice "rook" line
overal - rapid

Hey rapid i see u improved on ure structure

lmao...I guess so...that's really how I usually write..only i wrote this one to a beat and I wrote the verse against u without a beat...so that might be the diffrence...

1-0 me

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damn...rapidfire killed this kid you had better punches better structure and more complex lines gotta give ye props on ye finisher that was great keep it up man VOTE RAp...an yo cud you'z drop an honest vote on my battle thats in my sig thanjks pz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

/\ learn how to vote

and rapid...it does make a difference huh? lol
anyway i just did my verse so go and drop honest vote

Flow: Rapid
Puns: Rapid
Opener : Rapid
Closer: Rapid
Winner: Rapid

Could Yall Hit This Up? Please?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95247

iono about it making a diffrence in this battle..i think I coulda just wrote the shit in paragraph form with chinese letters n still won lol....but yea it looks prettier...

werd I'll drop a vote on ur battle kon..

peace

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yo you forgot to poll vote in my battle man...go do that...thanks..................................... ..

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

i just did...before u reminded me lol............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

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Rapidfire killed this hiper mc by all catagories ...................... i mean

this kid is the hip hop 101 and im the G-UNIT?? <- thats just wack anways Vote-Rapid

one more vote ya'll.....it'd be nice to have this battle over tonight.................
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peace

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damn good verse from u rapid..i see u shortened ur lines.....props to ya..............................

peace
4:20

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