D.O.I. elevation battle

16 bar max....ill spit first..no feeding

i got 2 hours to spit and u got anotha 2 after that

5votes
no dk
no hate
crew can vote
Twizzle Sticks cant vote

catagories

opening
struct
flow
punches
complexity
wordplay
metas
multis
closing
my vote

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you can 2 hours and i got four.
i will be spittin as soon as i can, but you can take as long as you want, as long as you spit tonite.

aiigh

check in

peace

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iight then....hes the final rules

D.O.I. elevation battle

16 bar max....ill spit first..no feeding

verses due bye 10:00 pm tonight eastern time

5votes
no dk
no hate
crew can vote
Twizzle Sticks cant vote

all votes must be explained

Catagories:

opening -
structure -
flow -
punches -
complexity -
wordplay -
metas -
multis -
complexity -
vocab -
closing -
my vote -

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aiiyyo i never knew you'd changed the rules.................

wat you mean eastern time, it like 10.05 p.m in the U.K

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its 5:10 here in the US.....so what u wanna do then

should right now and then u follow ??

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iight im gonna spit now

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aiight it 5:10 there i'll PM you when im done i was gonna leave it to the last like 30 mins that i had the keystyle or sum shit, but im writin as fast as i can. you can drop now or whem i've PM'ed you.

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iight check it...

I’m precise wit precession When shooting to Puncture and Rapture your Molecular Structure
Fuck a fight...I’m the type that'll Swiftly Snipe a bullet threw ya Windpipe at a Secular Juncture
I’m like ya Mechanical Pen with Each Click The Lead Sends out Rewriting ya scripts
I’m Igniting wit clips...You and Winning wont Happening like Bloods Uniting wit Crypts
I’m Inciting this Bitch...Observe how my Laser Smash 007’s face in half...& Fuck this Ass
Your like a Garbage Disposal in Mobile Homes nothing but TRAILOR TRASH !!!
With No Question, I’ll Beat you in to Considerations of Verbal Lessons
Young Couldn’t Pleasure himself jackin off to Baby Oil And Herbal Essence
You Sex Act Revolves Around Wrestling Cuz you take it in da Mouth Raw
Cut deep into ya skin like a saw… should’a listen to my sig when it said im gonna devour yall
When I dare attack my text possess flesh so fast it goes back and scares ya past livez
Create fission wit 007, LISTIN! He couldn’t type pure lyrics if his Hardware was baptized
Excessive obsessions with your own pictures I’ll diminish your mind frame in smile
Extreme removal of your digestive-system, serve you and have ya find fame in bile
Just one vision of Me Spittin will leave you speechless and your Bones Broken With Violence
Den Rip out Your Vocal Cords So When You Think Bout Talkin You Will Remember EnVy caused the Silence
I should be arrested cuz My Intense Verse is a killer and Has The Impact Of a Pack Of Misslez
Ill kill you when Destructive Stencilz Attackz...And Leave Your Head Crack Wit Pencilz
Double O seven’s shit has Less Play then a Boom Box wit No Speakers
Blow ya verse up like a Dumb Kid in Science Class usin Dro Beakers
ATTENTION!!! Everyone that likes 007’s shit should start up a group...The Horrible Flow Seekers
I spit so Raw, National Weather Service makes it mandatory that ya wear Snow Sneakers
I got this Rap Queer holdin on to my Johnson and then workin his Magic
Your without a reception like football benchwarmers with mouths full of static
Face it kiddo you couldn’t be hot if you took a fork and stuck it in an electrical socket
The only time this kid is on fire is when he drops a burning match in his pocket
You need to get lessons from a boxer cuz your known to lack Hard Punches in Hooks
Smack you in tha face wit a dictionary so you can really say you Hittin tha Books
Envy Popping Lines Hot Enough To Burn ya Skin Like Nitro Rays
007 So Retarded...He Thought Toasters Where Flat Screened Microwaves
Take a Lesson on Verbal Accuracy, this WACK Emcee think he Surpassing Me
You Flatter Me, I’d Give you a Hi-Fi But you Might Steal Tracks From Me !!!

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i'll never 'envy' ya 'skillz' i make young peeps write they 'willz'
if u ever in navy, you'll be gettin more than one kind of 'drill'*

and like a computer virus 'infection', be ready for 'deletion',
im in your crew for ur 'protection', when i join, it'll be 'completion'

and if you really pissed on haterz, you'd be sittin down,(-get it avy)
your records iller than mine, you gon leave the battle wit a 'frown'

if you used multis in 'lines', they'd be multi syllable 'lies'
use unlimited 'tries' but how, when each time he verbally 'dies'

im like 'oddjob' the way i cuts off heads with 'hats' 'on or off',*
im like the 'sun' and yous 'ice cream', like moist pussy you soft,

envy if got haters on hold, an if they heated, they burnt by my 'flame',
i take you to ur first loss, like jay Z, 'some things should never 'change'

i'll pull ya skull back further than LL cool J's hair 'line',
even with a battery and a floodlight, you still couldnt 'shine',

save this as text, so you can have a piece of history 'documentation',
stupid things get noticed, you should compete in a wack' presentation'

aiight y'all lets get hard on this mother fucker

even with ghost 'writers', lyrical 'fighters' and teams of dick 'riders',
schemin 'biters', lyrical 'reciters', and 'recyclers', no wins 'inside' ya,

'complex' 'texts' which show 'disrespet' in a form which they 'perplex',
you could 'flex' ya 'chest', win, it no 'contest', i put you in cardiac 'arrest'

your lyrical 'wishes' are lines that i 'dismisses', you be lovin mens 'kisses'
n washin the 'dishes', your ryhmes be wrong like mikes punches be 'misses'

im there ae master 'classes' i got lyrics for 'masses' leavin battles with scratches
dum, even with telescopic 'glasses', you could only recoginze mens passes',

[B]the multies were sick ^^^ right there^^^

im throwing punches like crazy loot, you cummin back wit loose 'change'
if you run with lazy 'boots' i'll catch, cut no 'slack' an infect ya 'brain'


my lines maybe 'stretched' but my writing arms-strong for ever,
u a pussy i 'detect' there only one way to rid this 'endevour'

bar before 'last', i had my time to 'blast' u already in the 'past'
i forgot about you 'fast' you unorganized, while my plan 'mapped'

aiight, thats it now im 'closing', like when a shop 'shuts',
if i got hoes looseing 'clothing' you'd be scared to bust 'nuts'

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wow you came a lot harder tha i expected.................nice drop enzy........................aiight good luck..................peace

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That is the best raps ive ever seen from both of you.................

opening-Envy
struct-Tie
flow-007
punches-007
complexity-Envy
wordplay-Tie
metas-007
multis-Envy
closing-Tie
my vote-007 .... up there its 007 5-4.....Good Shit props to both

first of all..thanks for the honest vote

2nd...007 change up ya struct...your not supposed to space ya bars and use "" and --- and '''...thats why i didnt get accepted into elite the first try...obviously nitro dont know what good struct is...and dont use bolds either like commin harder nw or killin em or shit like that

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i usually get the structure votes, but i will listen to your advice.
i dont usually do the 'e.g', and only usually Bolden my personals but i just bin experementin.

i thought this battle was one of the illest i seen and mad props and respect to ya.

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aiight..................c'mon peeps uppin for votes y'all............................................. ........................

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