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all my niggas hustlas
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Money got a nigga plottin Murder 4 Millions
Fuck how im feelin when its finse to go down let rounds killem and the case a be another decision to getaway stuck livin to get my pay wether pimpin or pushin weight pussy dosia and yay wit fully's toasta's and K's We plot in strategic fuck bobbin and weavin when we all squeezin and what a broad's needin has no meenin in A.O.B (all on a bitch) Leasin my game for cheese quick to release out my thang for Gs like its the thang to be all my niggas hustlas drug smugglas gun tuckin gurrila muthafuckas |
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You need to leave 3 names or 3 links of peoples feedback you left or this will get deleted..
This was alright..i thought you could have made it a little longer though....structure wise was ok, try making the lines around the same length so its structured good, cause you had some small ones and some long ones, try for the same length...vocab in this was decent, could be a bit better...the lyrics were pretty good....flow was alright, got off at spots, try adding some multies to it to help that out...but overall this was alright..keep at it. |
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