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12-03-03, 08:34 PM | #1 | |||||
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AnGelic Ties.
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Just Rip My Rap Book Cuz Thats My Life
Met this Chick that makes it possible to ....Know There Is a Christ!.... I'd Fight For Death if Life Past This Girl When I look into her Eyes Its A Picture Of Heavens Demise Even God would Give up Paradise For A Day Or Even A Night Id Take Revenge With Armys if She Ever Felt a Slap'a'Pain And Avenge Her Through Mind Games Ever She Felt Shame "Open'd My Eyes One Day To See Life She Walked with A Command In Her Eyes And When I look into Them I know That If I died Wouldnt Matta Cuz I Met A girl With Angelic Ties" Am I just another Passing Phase A Passing Day Will This End In ouR Fortune Or Will I Be Thiefed Of My Jade Am I Just Trippin, Insecure To This Haze So as we Dreamin and Schemin of Life on Our own Path To You Is This a Love song or is this another Pimp Rap.
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12-03-03, 08:39 PM | #2 | |||||
This is my first post!
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IP: C4D4 1048
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95975
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96245 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8523#post958523
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12-03-03, 08:41 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 202C A952
Dunny... yo structure is complicated... its hard to follow... yeah to you to rhymes an sounds good... but u also gotta let the reader understand it too... but yo i caught onto it... the verse or verses was coo... i liked this read actully... i don't like to many reads.. but this was a coo one... keep elevatin dunny... an this girl... seems like a real eye catcher..(like mine) on3
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12-03-03, 08:51 PM | #4 | ||||||
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shit was on point a little complex structure but a great read and i would love you to have you in the fam
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12-03-03, 08:52 PM | #5 | ||||||
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You can tell the man likes his topic. Ill rhyme typist? I dunno if I'd go that far. Still some really good shit right here.
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12-04-03, 04:50 AM | #6 | |||||||
Light Weight
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werd...your structure was hella complex and shit but i got the point. Shit was a pretty hot drop...I liked the the topic and your wordplay was tiight too. Guess you got them love jones a'y kicko lol....I aiighnt mad at cha. Be easy son, 1
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12-04-03, 07:02 PM | #7 | |||||
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12-04-03, 07:10 PM | #8 | |||||||
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this was a good drop. i liked your wordplay it was great the way you started this was dope as hell very good i didnt like how the last 2 lines were in the first verse but your descriptions fixed it so it flowed good anyways but this was a great drop and the title was very creative props on that an yo could you drop an opinion on the battle in my sig or my open mic thanks
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12-05-03, 06:49 PM | #9 | |||||
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12-06-03, 02:47 AM | #10 | |||||||
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word to ya muthaz. everyone in this spoke the truth basically. very nice
read as i already mentioned. dun't be jealuz of my first line. its barely as good as ur worst line. haha. nice rhyme. in due time. till then. peACE |
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12-20-03, 04:43 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 13AC 6538
up last time.
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